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rap it up

Is hip hop the place for a spat?
Kendrick and Drake each see a rat
For whom should we root?
They're both rappers cute
And fans will snap to the combat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Anaya Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 9:02 AM
I read about the war of words Compton vs Canada rap stars, a challenge & a response Kendrick won but Drakes' legacy in stone I don’t think they’ve spoken since the battle, ha a test of lyrical skill. Very creative, I really enjoyed this one, aside the political lims! A rappers delight
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Dear Duke, a great limerick poem explores the competition between two renowned rappers, Kendrick and Drake, and the predicament faced by their followers when it comes to choosing a side. Furthermore, it centers on the conjecture regarding which rapper followers ought to endorse in this dispute. The poem utilizes colloquial vocabulary and jargon commonly associated with hip-hop culture, including terms like "hip hop," "spat," "rat," and "snap." The inclusion of rhyming terms such as "rat" and "combat" imparts a lighthearted and whimsical atmosphere to the poem. The phrase "rappers cute" implies the affection that fans have for both Kendrick and Drake.
Beaufort Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 8:57 AM
SP, thanks so much for this comment. I did try to use language that would seem appropriate for the competition. I heard recently that they are calling a truce. I hope that is the case, but the fans may express some disappointment at that. As long as we all realize it's fun and not take it our ourselves too seriously, no harm in it all. Might be good for sales.
One Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Ha!! I love this one!!! I prefer limericks like this than the political ones.. you love to make a mockery of these things and rightly so, as these guys do it themselves..
Beaufort Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 8:49 AM
SO, I'll keep this comment in mind and continue to intersperse a lot of poems that relate to comical forms of life. This was actually a significant phenomenon since it affected many fans and followers of this music.
Empress Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 11:49 PM
Haha this made me smile! Both cute, so very well written. You touch on so many subjects thats discussed about in the world in the most creative manner! Brilliant picture to go with this too dear duke, lighthearted and fun one to start my day with. Pleasure reading this. Sending you always light
Beaufort Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 6:12 PM
IE, you're very kind as usual. Very glad you liked this. I am trying to write about different things as it's educational and fun. Sending you good wishes of course!!
Croft Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Enjoyed! Haven't listened to rap in a while, will have to see what the commotion is about.
Beaufort Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Karen, I saw this covered by the PBS news hour and was surprised by what I learned. Apparently, it's big news for those involved in this segment of the music business. Hope they don't take themselves too seriously!
Pandit Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:14 AM
A fun read, Duke. I see them in action.
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Neat Vijay. There are a lot of different expressions of art and we certainly may enjoy them all at our leisure. What they are doing...the rivalry...has apparently been good for the business aspect of the music. Ahh show business.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:38 PM
haha loved this Duke!
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Arthur, I read your recent work and I am struck by how much egotistical conduct and prejudice are behind our penchant for hurting people we don't know. At least these rappers are competing without violence (at least for now).
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:02 PM
Cute one but I have no clue who these guys are. I don't listen to rap.
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Andrea, I had briefly listened to Drake recently, as he is a Canadian rapper, and I was curious. However, I don't generally listen to rap either. PBS news hour did a story on this feud last night, which inspired this. The whole nature of the behavior involved does not inspire me. Some people love it though.
Greenhough Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 8:45 PM
This is a splendid limerick. Evidently, music can make enemies, as it has happened before. A good point.
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Thanks Hilda, apparently this feud has been going on for some time and is reflected in their music. There's really plenty of room for each to be a success, so I wonder about the egos involved.
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