Random Thoughts 63, Eileenesque
**Eileenesque**
3 stanzas of 5 lines with a chosen set meter (syllable count)
Must have a rhyme scheme; monorhyme seems to flow nicely
Stanza one - line 5 is a combination of lines 1 and 2
Stanza two - line 5 is a combination of lines 2 and 3
Stanza three - line 5 is a combination of lines 4 and 1
in this stanza the situation "comes full circle
and reverses the events in the quatrain."
*A(broad)*
Love, not our problem! that is my thought.
Through tribulation, conversation.
Be each others beacon of support,
reduce and relax away tension,
Conversation. Love, not our problem!
My heart has fled, I travel a(broad),
Stressed by your eternal damnation.
Accusations, I am left distraught
our fights stand as the culmination,
Eternal damnation, left distraught!
Long talks reprieve, harmless flirtation.
Deprivation of love leaves me flawed
after fleeing incarceration.
Found justification now I'm gone.
Talks reprieve, found justification.
Jared Pickett
3/12/2014
Asavvy1
Copyright © Jared Pickett | Year Posted 2014
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