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Random Thoughts 60 the Tyburn

**Tyburn** A six line poem consisting of 2,2,2,2,9,9 syllables **FreeAgency** Hopeless Pointless Speechless Useless Seems to be a Hopeless, Pointless fight I'm left Speechless, Useless with my plight Jared Pickett Asavvy1 2/8/2014

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/18/2014 10:13:00 AM

Not familiar with the form, the content is sad, energetically speaking [you did get this out already] to support your healing do one with FULL [thoughtful-hopeful,chokefull etc] Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/11/2014 1:42:00 PM

Tnks for introducimg this Tyburn form to me..Interesting.Re your poem..I felt the same way not once in my lifetime..Deep and somehow feels like there s no light at the end of the tunnel..Who knows maybe a firefly shines ..Dont give up faith.

Jared Pickett
Date: 2/11/2014 10:21:00 PM

You are very welcome!! Faith is something I will never give up on and I am too cocky to regress to depression!! Good to be back!!Asavvy1

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2014 8:34:00 PM

Serves as an example of a good tyburn poem.

Jared Pickett
Date: 2/12/2014 2:36:00 PM

Thank you!Asavvy1