Random Thoughts **50** Haiku--Tanka--Haiku

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For Linda Marie's Haiku--Tanka--Haiku contest....

Love for poetry,
savvy. This identity
loves controversy

Football and women,
conversation, love-making.
R & B, Reggae,
inspired meditation,
Four Tops, The Temptations

Taking vacations,
road trips across this nation..
Next stop, the ocean!!!


Jared Pickett
915/2010
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 4:55 PM
You have a random way of owning your own style and words. Love it ~ SKAT
La France Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:05 AM
"All" of them were sensational, well done~~
Loving Iii Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 11:26 AM
i can dig it. johnh loving iii
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner..Sara
Buggs Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Great write.Good luck on contest.Looks like a winner to me : ).Love,jamecia
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:44 AM
thankxxx for all your kudos in your comment Jared my sweet... luv... u and I do think alike in lots of things.. hhhmmmmm...looking forward to your next contest to astound u luv... it just gets better and better ... never dull or boring.. exiting all the time.. my old man can't keep up..need a whip now..hahahahahaha..are we still talking poetry? enjoy your Broncos today unless they have a bye week...luv.. GO GIANTS...
Devonshire Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Soup mail in a moment, Jared.
Butler Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Thanks for the HM in the Pantoum contest. Cool poem! Take care, -Mike
Sweetheart Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Appreciate the HM in your Pantoum contest..luv... brownie points are better but I understand... gave it my heart and soul ... mailed your package luv so let me know when u receive please... looking forward to your next contest.... enjoy your birthday..and do EVERYTHING the "Sweetheart" would do... know what I mean?????? luv..
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congratulations Jared on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:14 PM
A good way to play it, Jared. Congrats on your fine win. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:33 AM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
Cwiak Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Nice write, Jared. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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September 19, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Congratulations on your win sweetie. This is a wonderful poem. You're still my favorite poet. ILY....Love Scarlett
Sapp Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Congrats Jared! Good stuff!
Culverhouse Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 2:43 PM
enjoyed reading today and congrats on the big win!
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 4:26 AM
Congratulation for this winner in the contest, Jared
Sweetheart Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 12:23 AM
Congrats Jared on your first place win in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. with this wonderful write ..so expressive and full of emotion... please forward me your mailing address via soup mail so I will be able to mail u your $50.00 visa gift card ...thankxxx for supporting my contests ..with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Enjoy your Haiku and Tanka writes..I would love to get that road trip across the nation..Maybe by internet..Sara
Henderson Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Haven't done much reggae lately. I need to catch up on the modern movement. Good poem. Charles
Mehta Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 10:20 AM
A wonderful entry to the sweetheart's contest, Good luck. Jared
Brown Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. Hope you have a wonderful day. A winner for sure. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Nicely done, Jared. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 12:51 PM
thankxxx for supporting my contest oh ASavvy 1 and good luck Mr. J.. this is wonderful... u got all the things I LUV to do as well... ah u know the "Sweetheart" so well ... appreciate the charming entry..luv..
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