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Random Thoughts 47 Trois Par Huit

Trois Par Huit AAB BB BCC 3,6,9,12,12,9,6,3 Workout muscle bound gaining pound after pound triceps, biceps, lats, a cut up back. Push ups, sit ups, crunches to create a six pack, tuna fish, chicken, fruits and veggies for a snack. Summer is here, I can't do without Bronze body tan, so devout. This work-out. Jared Pickett 5/12/2010 Asavvy1

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Derrick Burton

Date: 5/15/2010 9:41:00 AM

wow, good luck with that looks like who ever they are gonna really need alot of disapline making sure they stay disaplined. Enjoy your weekend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 4:03:00 PM

SOUP MAIL SWEETNESS ...LUV...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/13/2010 2:34:00 AM

Is that you eating chocolate and cake,Is that your head peeping in the fridge. .got you. .twenty extra sit ups for that. :) Sweet poem. .and I'm impressed how many forms you know,i never tried this. .I need to study some more forms,I'm lazy at it . .Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2010 12:23:00 PM

Great pace in this motivational poem, Jared. After reading it, I feel like putting all desserts on hold. Swim suit season has already arrived in Florida and though working out feels like beating a dead horse, I don't want to look like one while tanning on the beach. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn

Brittany Moon

Date: 5/12/2010 9:04:00 AM

Thnx for your comments on my poems...may we both be blessed from this poetrysite...~Brittany~

Brittany Moon

Date: 5/12/2010 9:03:00 AM

Interesting...Keep up the good work..God Bless...~Brittany~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 8:42:00 AM

Thankxxx honey ..we all inspire each other.. in this case .. a man automatically knew what would spark the "Sweetheart's" interest ..so kudos to u my friend.. thankxxx. luv..

Date: 5/12/2010 8:33:00 AM

Mr. JP, you left out the "sweat" part but I can read between the lines. Do it!!! Scarlett

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/12/2010 8:29:00 AM

What ever the form it is well thought out, you my friend just invented your own form,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 8:14:00 AM

To the victor comes the spoils.. ever hear that saying before.. u put in the time to get a lean machine body and it pays off as u strut your stuff in the Summer ... just luv the way u wrote it .. u may start a new trend on Soup ... I just posted my new Sestina .. The Break Up .. would u mind reading since u get kudos at the end..thankxxx.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"