Random Thoughts *3* the Etheree

Work,
Trying
to succeed
in life's grand scheme.
Bills always out-weigh,
leaving me close to none.
I work hard for what I have,
electronics, toys for grown men.
Work is tolerable;.......... but mini
vacations help maintain my sanity..........

Etheree:
A poetry form that consists of ten lines of 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 syllables.....

Jared Pickett
9/05/2009
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:15 AM
My next endeavor is this etheree... Great write...Dad
Brown Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 9:13 AM
So true! I need a vaction oh so badly. Great write, keep writing!
Fraser Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Nice poem of which i can relate to>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 12:04 PM
So much truth in your last line. Nice use of this challenging form. I think most will relate to your words. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 4:13 AM
Interesting style. I haven't tried this one. Sara
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:47 AM
It workes for me Jared, enjoyed the read, Sincerely Moses
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