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Random Thoughts *3* the Etheree

Work, Trying to succeed in life's grand scheme. Bills always out-weigh, leaving me close to none. I work hard for what I have, electronics, toys for grown men. Work is tolerable;.......... but mini vacations help maintain my sanity.......... Etheree: A poetry form that consists of ten lines of 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 syllables..... Jared Pickett 9/05/2009 Asavvy1

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Date: 12/3/2009 9:15:00 AM
My next endeavor is this etheree... Great write...Dad
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Date: 11/17/2009 9:13:00 AM
So true! I need a vaction oh so badly. Great write, keep writing!
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Date: 9/19/2009 6:47:00 AM
Nice poem of which i can relate to>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 12:04:00 PM
So much truth in your last line. Nice use of this challenging form. I think most will relate to your words. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Karen
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Date: 9/5/2009 4:13:00 AM
Interesting style. I haven't tried this one. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:47:00 AM
It workes for me Jared, enjoyed the read, Sincerely Moses
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