Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Random Thoughts *23* Double Etheree

Miss N.Y.C.
Double Etheree
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1

-----No
-romance,
-----promoting
her deep longing,
--------------sexuality.
-----------Only casually.
--Occasionally, my creep.
------I am her vanilla creamer,
blended well with her cappuccino
-----influence, sweet, stirred by my ********!
------------Mayor of my world, sole candidate
---in this election. Love injected.
--------Definition of perfection. 
her body recites a verse,
softly singing to me.
-----Lovely poetry,
------stimulating
----  melody.
romance?
NO!!!!


Jared Pickett
10/5/09
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James Fraser October 10, 2009 at 10:31 AM Delightful read Jared >> James

P Sheart October 9, 2009 at 7:46 AM Hi Jared, This is different. Great visual from start to finsh here. Pretty brave too, LOL. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments. Have a inspiring weekend! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patricia

Doris Culverhouse October 8, 2009 at 2:12 PM sexy, just a little romace?:)

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2009 at 9:05 AM Never seen this form. Interesting topic. Keep writing. Sara

Johneta Ohler October 6, 2009 at 3:24 PM wow.... that was... interesting......

Charmaine Chircop October 5, 2009 at 10:49 PM Vanilla creamer you're quite a seducer.. you made me smile Jared and i love the-ending romance?No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sweet write--Charma

Raul Moreno October 5, 2009 at 7:23 PM "I am her vanilla creamer, blended well with her cappuccino influence, sweet, stirred by my erection" great lines, nice work as always...Raul