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Random Thoughts 20 a Rondel

*****Rondel: A French form with 13 lines: Two quatrains and a quintet.. rhyming is as follows: ABba, abAB, abbaA******* Exotic miss caramel swirl, seductive in her dress of satin. I had make it happen, make myself known to this girl. I approach. Her name is Pearle! we hit a club in lower Manhattan. Exotic miss caramel swirl, seductive in her dress of satin. I gave salsa dancing a whirl. I did decent, on a whim. pheromones erupt from her skin, this beautiful Latin girl Exotic miss caramel swirl. Jared Pickett 9/28/09 Asavvy1

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/15/2023 1:55:00 PM

:) I can see you "salsa dancing," in my mind. Just sayin'. I love the way your thoughts curl around each other. This is beautiful, romantic and dreamy. Love your random thoughts, and how they create such a breathtaking mood. :) Brandy

Jared Pickett
Date: 1/15/2023 2:00:00 PM

Only in your mind? Lol! The Rondel is one of my favorites to write. The syllable pattern and use of the same lines in different places within each stanza. It brings a different element to the thought.. Much love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2010 10:49:00 PM

Hey, Jared, you should call this rhyme! Just thought i'd mention that since you required no free verse and if anyone looks here for your example, they might get confused. This one really was a delight! andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2010 10:39:00 PM

I really like this rondel you showed us. Thanks for identifying it easily for me to locate it in your contest rules. LUv, Andrea

Brandee Augustus

Date: 6/2/2010 1:07:00 PM

Very nice! I really loved this. Lovely flow and such a vivid picture of this night with few words.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/24/2010 12:20:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest JP.Rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 2:21:00 PM

nicely written

James Fraser

Date: 10/1/2009 12:43:00 PM

Miss Caramel Swirl, what a yummy name Jared >> James

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/29/2009 8:39:00 AM

I Really like this one Jared ... There's nothing like a Night on the Town... Feeling Good, With Good Company and a harmless night of Fun... Keep It Coming Kiddo... You Know... I Think I'll Post A Poem for You... You May Like... (smile) ... Will Send You SoupMail, When It's On... Chow-Bella (smile) MoonBee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2009 5:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us . Wishing you the best with your caramel swirl. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2009 4:49:00 AM

Beautiful picture painted here. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/28/2009 4:56:00 PM

This poem sizzles with this hot salsa dance,enjoy the moves with your caramel swirl,with your exotic Pearle,a delight to read Jared-Charma