Jared Pickett Poet Alliteration

Random Thoughts*27* Tongue Twisters

A & S



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                                   Absolute amorousness to abrasive absinthe.
                                                  Alteration amplified!
                                                            Abrupt?
                                                         Absolutely!



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                                                               A 
                                        sentimental sanctuary serenades 
                                                               a 
                                                      sapphire saint.
                                                               A
                                              sacrificial saga showers 
                                                               a  
                                             shadowy signature shape.


Jared Pickett
10/15/09

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Charmaine Chircop October 17, 2009 at 8:04 AM i love this twisting toungue:) A and S--i got it--Charma

Sami Al-Khalili October 17, 2009 at 7:00 AM I love these! Esspeically the first, ahh tongue twisters, it brings me back to the second grade, trying to grasp each word in every tongue twister. Creative write, Love, Sami.

James Fraser October 17, 2009 at 2:56 AM Jared, i'm still trying to get my tongue round the second one, kool writes my friend >> James

Raul Moreno October 15, 2009 at 6:56 PM The second one was my favorite, nice work Jared...Raul

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2009 at 2:21 PM Interesting thoughts and design. Love the alliteration. Keep writing. Sara

Marty Owens October 15, 2009 at 1:13 PM Nice....Marty