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Ramsgate Tunnel Wayra

concrete existence echo in emptiness as the night turns powdered steel rouge lost in the labyrinth passage in shadows of deep tones 8/14/2019
Poetry Contest: SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
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Callus Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 11:49 AM
You have tackled this visual prompt with the ability of both writer and painter, Eve! I love it all, especially the middle line. Congratulations on your merited high placement. Hugs // paul
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations,Eve on your win. Deep thoughtful verse.
Gauthier Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 5:13 AM
Congrats on your podium finish, Eve. Well done.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:12 AM
Truly errie entry that fits the picture superbly Eve. Excellent! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : ) xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve, nicely done. John
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 2:13 PM
I really like how you did your entry. Awesome work. Congrats in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:59 PM
because you flow with radiant lines, this read takes a high spot in my contest, eve... sending my endearing congrats!
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:58 PM
- Poetically beautiful, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:42 PM
I knew this would place high! congrats sweet lady :)-luloo
DiMino Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Wow, the writing, Amazing! And the artwork as well. Love how you use physical realities as metaphors to explain spirit dimensions. Extraordinary wit and comprehension. Love it!
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 11:04 AM
wow! amazing take on the prompt :) good luck, if I was judge it's a top winner :)-luloo
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 5:27 AM
Not firing up my muse Eve but you've made it look so easy. Good luck. Tom
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