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Pugnacious mind of mine Seeks an end to this winter fog Your ramblings, on and on I close the shutters, for spring is not in sight Pig manure emasculates the air Not a farm in sight Your ramblings, on and on I find solace in the bedroom closet I hear the car door slam The front door slam Your ramblings, on and on I chamber the round then nothing but stars

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Date: 7/7/2014 8:01:00 PM
John,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:34:00 PM
Yes, the ramblings of a winter bored human. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/27/2014 5:58:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, John. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/27/2014 12:59:00 AM
hELLO John, Welcome to PS I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing .. Hope to follow up all your work ..Your new PS friend RRC
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Date: 6/25/2014 9:45:00 PM
Hi John, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:39:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,John :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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