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Written on February 19, 2024

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When time echoes the promise of a rambling soul, one who knows that the past never can be left, because it is there that solace leaves its caress, its breath ever rising in the presence of sorrow’s tangled web ~ quote by poet She waits in silence, for the gentle winds, Soft revelations of what might have been, She remembers with feelings she rescinds. She reflects on lost nights that did begin, Soundless and still, like the sea of belief, Soft revelations of what might have been, Sometimes it feels she’s been left in her grief, Sure to learn of what comes from night’s lonely, Soundless and still, like the sea of belief, Should she call friends or her one and only? Soon, she recalls her beloved has passed, Sure to learn of what comes from night’s lonely. Swiftly, time reveals rambling that will last, Sharing memoirs, she drifts from room to room, Soon, she recalls her beloved has passed, Sensitive, like dreams, her heart is all gloom, She waits in silence, for the gentle winds, Sharing memoirs, she drifts from room to room, She remembers with feelings she rescinds.

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:45:00 AM
Gina, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the image too, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2024 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write/quote/picture. I enjoyed reading it... Have a great/fun day writing away...............
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Date: 2/19/2024 12:37:00 PM
I like how you started the first word with an S.. very clever and nice use of the form.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Date: 2/19/2024 9:50:00 AM
This is true poetry involving imagery and emotion.
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Date: 2/19/2024 5:02:00 AM
beautiful poem, Regina. The emotions it evoked in me remain. The waiting in silence...those words resonate with me as I was thinking about some of my lost loved ones...the last paragraph touched me. Faving. Have a great day, hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/19/2024 3:42:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Regina. Filled with such powerful imagery and emotion.
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