Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rictameter

Rambling

“Father Sun is continually rambling and by doing so defines the night.” ~ by poet

Rambling
cosmic thoughts of
Mother Moon, Father Sun,
many of which I pen to page
in recounting their passionate story.
Demonstrating his devotion,
Sun dies so Moon may rise.
He spends his nights
rambling.

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Paula Goldsmith February 28, 2024 at 9:19 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative Rictameter "Rambling" write/great quote. Love It... Have a great/fun day writing away............... Linda Alice Fowler February 28, 2024 at 11:46 AM Hi dear Paula. Thanks for your congrats. I enjoyed your rambling during different phases of life, too. Congrats on your win! :)

Gershon Wolf February 20, 2024 at 8:16 PM 'Sun dies, so moon may rise' - I find that line not just prophetic, but profound. Kudos, Gershon Linda Alice Fowler February 21, 2024 at 3:01 PM They have quite a relationship, those two. Thank you gw! laf :)

Jerry Brotherton February 19, 2024 at 3:14 AM A marvelous poem, Linda. Sun dies so the moon may rise is a wonderfully creative show of the sacrifices we are willing to make for love. Have a blessed day, my friend. Linda Alice Fowler February 19, 2024 at 6:31 AM Thank you Jerry. A great start to the week! :)