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Rambling

“Father Sun is continually rambling and by doing so defines the night.” ~ by poet Rambling cosmic thoughts of Mother Moon, Father Sun, many of which I pen to page in recounting their passionate story. Demonstrating his devotion, Sun dies so Moon may rise. He spends his nights rambling.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/28/2024 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative Rictameter "Rambling" write/great quote. Love It... Have a great/fun day writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/28/2024 11:46:00 AM

Hi dear Paula. Thanks for your congrats. I enjoyed your rambling during different phases of life, too. Congrats on your win! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2024 8:16:00 PM

'Sun dies, so moon may rise' - I find that line not just prophetic, but profound. Kudos, Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/21/2024 3:01:00 PM

They have quite a relationship, those two. Thank you gw! laf :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/19/2024 3:14:00 AM

A marvelous poem, Linda. Sun dies so the moon may rise is a wonderfully creative show of the sacrifices we are willing to make for love. Have a blessed day, my friend.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/19/2024 6:31:00 AM

Thank you Jerry. A great start to the week! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/18/2024 3:41:00 PM

Outstanding. I enjoyed your thoughts and the notion of the love and devotion between the sun and moon..and the last three lines were brilliant. have a great week ahead, hugs, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/18/2024 4:51:00 PM

You are the best Sara. I love the relationships of Nature and how they react with one another. Thanks for the visit! A great week for you and Bill as well :)