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Raking Fallen Leaves

Wind 
B l e w
Leaves

Feet
D r a g
Line


10/29/2020


In Just A Few Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Susan Ashley

November 18, 2020 at 7:42 PM

Eve, back with happy congrats for your wonderful win in Joseph's contest with this lovely Autumn poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2020 at 6:24 PM

big cheers on your bright award, eve...much enjoyed...huggs

Gershon Wolf

November 1, 2020 at 4:15 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest, Eve! :)

Marilene Evans

November 1, 2020 at 1:07 PM

Congrats on your win. Wind passes through, foot prints stay...

John Watt

October 31, 2020 at 11:51 PM

A lovely fall poem, Eve. Congrats on your win, and enjoy your November ~ John

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:13 PM

Great imagery you have created Eve! Congrats on your win :) Hugs ~ Ani

Jan Allison

October 31, 2020 at 3:41 PM

i love the fallen leaves Eve:-)many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

October 31, 2020 at 12:40 PM

Nicely done Eve, Congrats on your win..

Alexis Y.

October 31, 2020 at 11:52 AM

Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

October 31, 2020 at 11:47 AM

Congratulations on the win Eve! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2020 at 11:27 AM

- A great poem in a few words ... congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

October 30, 2020 at 6:05 PM

So much imagery! I love the spirit of this piece, Eve. A vivid sensory pleasure! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Tom Cunningham

October 30, 2020 at 11:44 AM

Then you get them in a pile and another gust blows them again lol. Good luck Eve. Tom

Silent One

October 30, 2020 at 3:38 AM

You did this so well..

Mystic Rose Rose

October 30, 2020 at 3:38 AM

I love going through strewn leaves, no greater action to lift the soul, a wonderful 6 lines, wish we were young again and rustling through those leaves Eve, we could catch an armful and throw them up in the air then squeal with delight, Love and hugs xo