Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Raising the Moses

The Egyptian princesses were bored
Before they found Moses
But delighted by him almost immediately
He changed their lives in the most extraordinary ways
They became selfless and giving
Having no idea they were raising THE Moses

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Gershon Wolf May 11, 2022 at 11:22 AM The whole scenario is rather interesting... Caren Krutsinger May 11, 2022 at 7:49 PM I think so too

Joe Maverick May 10, 2022 at 10:19 PM Really good one Caren, gets you thinking of The different effects that were to come.' Caren Krutsinger May 11, 2022 at 7:49 PM It surely does Joe

Bill Baker May 10, 2022 at 9:41 PM There are many possibilities to how the story can be told. This one is interesting to say the least. Bill Caren Krutsinger May 11, 2022 at 7:49 PM Thank you my friend

L Milton Hankins May 10, 2022 at 2:07 PM Hmmm...interesting. I have often wondered if Moses became Thutmose, one of the pharaohs. Just a silly thought. Caren Krutsinger May 11, 2022 at 7:49 PM Possibility is there and plausibility too