Rainy Weekend

a rainy weekend
                frolicking in soft wet sand
                               ocean surf mimics

                                             ~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 10, 2011 at 12:05 PM
What a creative and image-filled haiku, Annalise! I like the way you describe the ocean surf as mimicking the rain. It's always fun to walk the beach on warm rainy days. Let's frolick together! Love, Carolyn
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February 10, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Nice! I enjoyed this one. Thanks so much for your kind comments on my stuff. Perhaps the beach called for the ocean "come back to bed." Love, Will
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