Rainy Morning

Dreamy Rainy Morning

Indian Summer heat broke and now,
Rain on morning windows streams down;
Coffee seems to taste better this day,
Cool and cozy, a day to play,

A warm robe around the shoulders curls;
Morning music playing low,
As raindrops on the windows roll,
A day to exhale, take it slow.

Nature will loosen fall leaves from trees,
Diehards like jewels with colors shine,
And I, I cuddle in my easy chair,
To enjoy meanderings of my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Just beautiful Sunlite!:)) Picture perfect with the hot coffee and all the rest of it!Well done!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D.
Ashley Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Ohh such a beautiful, intimate poem Sunlite. Your enchanting write wrapped itself around me like the your 'warm robe around the shoulder curls' Such a fantastic and expressive poem that I so enjoyed!
Downing  Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Ahhh, this makes me wanna do just that. Just cozy up on my chair with a rope on and watch football all day. Beautiful poem Sunlite... hugs and smiles :)
Hinshaw Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:11 PM
A wonderful write, Sunlite. I love rainy days and you have written a cozy poem for those days! My kind of day and my kind of poetry. Many thx for your kind comments re the Hope write and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Green Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 11:36 AM
Beautiful my friend. Very warm and comforting. Sounds like the perfect morning to me. Your poem smiles today.
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Hello, there, Chris. Hope you have lots of perfect mornings. Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Happy dreaming--very soft, joyful depiction!
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Thank you - I hope you have dreamy times, too.
Sands Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:22 AM
This is so nice Sunlite! Just perfect. I love the line... Diehards like jewels with colors shine. I can just see this and feel this. You have reached the reader well. :)
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:16 PM
I am so pleased you liked this one and that line.
Sivey Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:06 AM
Ahh, this poem makes me relax and feel comfy this morning! I have a feeling of calm from this brilliantly written write my friend! "And I, I cuddle in my easy chair," That double notation of "I" creates an awe effect, a great peaceful way of writing this incredible poem! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Bless you, your encouraging comments are so welcome.
Gauthier Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Awesome dreamy day. Such a comfy poem, I'm making it a fave. Thank you.
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Now that is kind! A fave! Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Lovely morning! Coffee does taste better on a good day :)
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Thank you, I assume, fellow coffee drinker.
Buck Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:20 PM
I'm down in the basement where I store my muse and computer. It's chilly here and I believe as I read this I felt warmer somehow. Thank you for that. Keep them coming. Thank you also for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Dear, dear Old Buck! Thank you for this kind comment as well as those on some older poems.
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