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Rainy Monday

I woke up on Monday morning to a rainstorm, gloomy drizzle was hitting my bedroom window; cozy in bed I wanted no part of the storm, I saw tall trees bend- and the wind howl and blow. Gloomy drizzle was hitting my bedroom window, then, there was a loud cloudburst and a torrent fell; I saw tall trees bend- and the wind howl and blow, all peace and harmony and more sleep was farewell. Then, there was a loud cloudburst and a torrent fell, I threw off my cat and headed for the kitchen; all peace and harmony and more sleep was farewell, waiting for boiling- a nice daydream was broken. I threw off my cat and headed for the kitchen, then, a thundering huge MEOW was at my feet; waiting for boiling- a nice daydream was broken, I made my cafe, fed the cat and called her sweet, Then, a thundering huge MEOW was at my feet, cozy in bed I wanted no part of the storm; I made my cafe, fed the cat and called her sweet, I woke up on Monday morning to a rainstorm. _______________________ February 19, 2018 Poetry/Pantoum/Rainy Monday Copyright Protected, ID 18-9957-72-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Rainy Days and Mondays sponsor, Silent One Second Place
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Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Beautifully executed form - lends itself marvellously for a rainy dreary morning... Congrats on your win, BW
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Line, thank you for the beautiful and the congrats !
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Melodious pantoum ... Wonderful ... Congratulations, BW ...
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Probir, thank you for the wonderful and the congratulations ~
Y. Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Hi BW, I enjoy the Pantoum form. And you the form justice with this well written write. Good content and amazing imagery. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Alexis, thank you for that nice comment and for the congrats ~
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:16 AM
- Congratulations on your win, B.W. :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Sun, thank you for the congrats and the hugs ~
One Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Your pantoum flowed and rhymed very well.. nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Silent, thank you for the contest and my great placement, so appreciate ~
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