Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Rainy Days and Mondays -

The tears champion ... rain
Harmonic drops from the sky
Just for fun ... could I stop it ?
If action is not stronger than a flower
Monday morning with rhymes and free rhythm
The emotions can not be copied
Keeping me alive, no longer mourning


Everyone is talking about the weather
"After the rain comes the sun"
but that's just words
Let the weather be as it is,
listen to the music of the rain drops
We must love the one we hate most
even on monday's morning








20.02.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Contest sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place in the contest

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Abubakar Mohammed Musa March 13, 2018 at 6:45 AM That's good. My felicitations toward your works. Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2018 at 2:04 PM - Glad you enjoyed it many thanks, Abubakar :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven March 2, 2018 at 8:33 PM Hi Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in the contest. I have to admit i love the rain. I used to enjoy walking in the rain, had many wonderful thoughts. As always, you write a wonderful poem. I can just picture the imagery your words display. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2018 at 11:30 AM - Can not say I love rain, Mike ... we have too much all year round - Many thanks for visit, comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands February 27, 2018 at 9:37 AM Congratulations for your win Ann-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2018 at 11:30 AM - Heidi, many thanks for visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray February 26, 2018 at 2:28 AM A perfect poem to read on a Monday morning on the Algarve, awaiting the promised rain Sunshine. Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 2:53 AM - Outside my window ... it's snowy and cold, Jean :) - Many thanks for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish February 25, 2018 at 8:15 PM Reminds me of the song by the Carpenters. I hope yo can explain the last line to me - I do not understand how we can love "the one we hate most". Glad you like postcards - deltiolgy is an enjoyable and instructive hobby. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 12:24 AM - We should not hate at all, Matthew - Thank you for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier February 24, 2018 at 6:53 PM Excellent advice, Sunshine. Congrats on your fine win. Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 6:39 AM - Line, many thanks for visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta February 24, 2018 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on your beautiful win for the inspiring poem, Sunshine ... Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2018 at 12:37 PM - Probir, many thanks for visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sathya Babu February 23, 2018 at 8:51 PM Congratulations on your TOP WIN :-). Like the Harmonic drops from the sky. Regards,Sathya Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2018 at 12:36 PM - Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Sathya :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy February 23, 2018 at 7:53 PM CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2018 at 12:36 PM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit February 23, 2018 at 5:08 PM Returning with congrats Anne-Lise on your win. Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2018 at 12:35 PM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith February 23, 2018 at 11:31 AM Keeping us all alive, not just physically, congratulations Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2018 at 12:26 PM - Many thanks Charlie, for comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day February 23, 2018 at 7:50 AM Words to live by - Congrats on your win! Jesse Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2018 at 8:06 AM - Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May February 23, 2018 at 7:09 AM Congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2018 at 7:15 AM - Joseph, many thanks for congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith February 23, 2018 at 6:19 AM Congratulations Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2018 at 7:15 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham February 23, 2018 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your win Sunshine. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2018 at 7:13 AM - Many thanks for congratulations Tom, appreciate it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One February 23, 2018 at 5:50 AM Loved the opening two lines Anne Lise... It's not raining today, but it is freezing!! Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2018 at 7:12 AM - Glad you enjoyed it many thanks S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May February 22, 2018 at 1:46 PM Dancing to the music of the rain...Nicely penned Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 2:18 PM - Thanks for the lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. February 22, 2018 at 8:12 AM Hi Anne-Lise, You painted such a lovely picture with words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 11:29 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment and good wishes, Alexis :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cook February 21, 2018 at 10:04 PM So very true, I remember when I lived on the farm listening to the rain on our metal roof during the night. Put me to sleep, very calming. Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 3:38 AM - Many thanks Tom, for lovely comment and your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley February 21, 2018 at 7:31 PM This is beautiful, and I love the philosophy. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 3:36 AM - Viv, many thanks for great comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman February 21, 2018 at 4:21 PM This is different Anne-Lise, and so positive..love it.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 3:34 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment, Harry :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2018 at 3:27 PM I love it. It's simple and just how I like a poem to be on this kind of topic. WEll done, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 3:32 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan February 21, 2018 at 6:39 AM Wow... This is so nice Anne ,with a positive approach.. Reads like a winner...well done. Good luck in the contest.... Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2018 at 8:12 AM - Many thanks for beautiful comment and visit, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams February 21, 2018 at 6:01 AM We love the rain over here Anne-Lise, and heave a sigh of relief when we get it. You have written a wonderful poem, very fitting for the contest, I wish you good luck....Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2018 at 8:11 AM - I do not like rain at all Maria, but do not tell anyone - We have rain all year round - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper February 20, 2018 at 12:42 PM Wonderful write, Sunshine , you did this form so well. I love the photo it is so beautiful. luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2018 at 5:38 AM - Many thanks for beautiful words and visits, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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