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Rainy Days

The monsoonal matriarch cradles her pregnant belly 
Delirious with life giving blood from the womb of all nature’s gifts
As she lays distended, expectant and grey
Upon the craggy summits

Her breath billows above the bloated forests
Nurturing ominous notes as she sweeps through the trees
Like the phantom of the opera
Tuning her timbre, yet masking her desire

And now

Her contralto; it begins…

Her song breathes across the valley in rhythmical sheets
A symphonic auditorium of liquid splendour
Inciting a libretto of Lyre birds to concert in the mist

A monsoonal medley

Enticing insects to assemble in an ensemble
Their raucous chorus imploring the humid madness
Through a cacophonous chorale
Teasing the tempo from the maestro
As the crescendo climaxes to thunderous applause

Her encore; a sweeping army of waterfalls
Advance upon the sodden valley
Roaring to deafness over
Exploding banks and streams that gouge and tear

And then
It all stops

To a breath of drops…





Leonora Galinta’s contest: Rainy Days
12 September 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/10/2014 9:29:00 PM
superb write Michael.. :D love your second stanza best and the way you incorporate musical terms.. :D! wow...
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Date: 9/21/2014 9:31:00 AM
WOW! An exceptional write.
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Date: 9/14/2014 4:36:00 PM
really very beautifully crafted excellent piece
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Date: 9/13/2014 11:55:00 AM
Very delightful write Rainy days, Mark
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:37:00 PM
wowowow, maybe the best one I have seen for this contest!! Mine, not posted yet, pales by comparison.
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:12:00 PM
Ah, the maestro of the maelstrom. Nicely done, the metaphor of music.
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Date: 9/12/2014 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful! I love the ending lines . . . Makes one catch her breath.
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