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Rainy Day In Wales

The Gre.atest of sounds is rain coming down ,on a caravan roof on your hol's Its one of the b.est beats around since Ringo Starr played on those drums. so get the dominoes out and start counting out the fives and the threes You look out of the window and watch as the rain just buckets it down. You turn on the heater, and shout as you beat your sister at the five and the threes. Your dad tells you lies about the rain coming down as being from god crying in heaven . As the light fades away your tucked safe away and the rain turns into a lullaby from an angel. night skat comp entry 16022016 not sure if fives and threes played over the pond think it may have, its a game played with the domino's

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Date: 2/22/2016 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Stephen on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/23/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you will do
Date: 2/21/2016 1:54:00 AM
You should be able to edit your poems if you like. If you click on "My Poems" in the left side of your screen, and then scroll down to one of your poems there should be an edit button, also on the left side. Yeah, Hay-on-the-Wye is where the book festival is held, but I didn't go during the festival. I just love all the scattered book stores everywhere.
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Date: 2/21/2016 5:03:00 AM
see what it does weird Most Unexceptional is me typing b.est without the full stop
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/21/2016 5:01:00 AM
I do repost it and it changes it back experiment going to type b.est without the full stop lol here go's best
Date: 2/20/2016 9:49:00 PM
Stephen, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/21/2016 1:44:00 AM
thank you poet destroyer
Date: 2/20/2016 9:07:00 PM
Stephen, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/21/2016 1:45:00 AM
No probs thanks for running the comp :-)
Date: 2/17/2016 9:47:00 PM
So THIS was the Ringo Starr poem ... lol! You know part of the reason I clicked on this is because I actually visited my uncle in Wales (I'm from Idaho). It's a beautiful place, and I especially liked Hay-on-the-Wye. This was a unique rainy day poem. Are the periods in between some or you words intentional or just typos?
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:50:00 AM
No its a pain dont know if its my browser or poetry soup website but it changes words so greatest changes to something like most exceptional and best changes as well its a pain as you cant change words in a poem , hay on wye was it the book festival i thank you

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