Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » Rainy Day In Georgia

Sara Kendrick | + Follow Poet |

Rainy Day In Georgia

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.

Menacing dark clouds Sky covered in gray shawl Sun peaks through then gone Hope does not linger Rain will continue Mountain ridge of Army tank green Light soft beauty Crown of dark clouds Beheld gift Of beauty For moment Dampness Covers Fog

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/23/2012 6:47:00 AM

This is wonderful, Sara. I love each line you have here. Full of peacefulness :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/22/2012 12:46:00 PM

Amazing description of this rainy day, Sara. I like the way you personify the sun. Especially liked the way your rainy day drifted into fogginess. This is much like the story of life, my friend. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 1/22/2012 6:22:00 AM

Beautifully written Diminished Hexaverse here Sara.Liked the description of nature very much.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2012 6:10:00 AM

a very descriptive piece laden with light somber touch... lovely, sara..:) hugggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/21/2012 11:51:00 PM

Dear, Sara, love the beauty rain can pass over.. just don't like the dampness......thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2012 8:31:00 PM

wondrous visuals Sara.. feeling the view in each line so well written luv.. hope all is well.. I am recovering slowly now.. Ron is typing all for me.. have a drainage tube in my hand from infection.. so hoping it will do the trick.. thankxx for prayers..luv..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/21/2012 4:51:00 PM

you describe the day so well that i am able to see it all from here..

Jack Horne

Date: 1/21/2012 2:40:00 PM

I love this atmospheric poece, my friend. I must admit, it's my sort of weather

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/21/2012 12:32:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem, Sara. I really liked your second line " sky covered in gray shawl". Wonderful imagery. Love, KIm

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2012 12:08:00 PM

Rain, dark clouds.....Yes,we dream about sun and spring now.Lovely poem Sara,and I like the title:"Rainy Day In Georgia" - oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2012 11:54:00 AM

This is a wonderful display of a rainy day in Georgia! Very good descriptions, especially of the rain and the clouds and the one liner of Fog was very good fit for this poem! I loved it! Awesome Work!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2012 10:31:00 AM

Brook Benton sang about a rainy night in Georgia. You have written about a rainy day in Georgia. This DH vividly describes the Cherokee lands during and after a rainy day.