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Rainy Day In Georgia

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Menacing dark clouds
Sky covered in gray shawl
Sun peaks through then gone
Hope does not linger
Rain will continue

Mountain ridge of
Army tank green
Light soft beauty 
Crown of dark clouds

Beheld gift
Of beauty
For moment

Dampness
Covers

Fog

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Dinda Minardi Date: 1/23/2012 6:47:00 AM This is wonderful, Sara. I love each line you have here. Full of peacefulness :) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/22/2012 12:46:00 PM Amazing description of this rainy day, Sara. I like the way you personify the sun. Especially liked the way your rainy day drifted into fogginess. This is much like the story of life, my friend. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/22/2012 6:22:00 AM Beautifully written Diminished Hexaverse here Sara.Liked the description of nature very much. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/22/2012 6:10:00 AM a very descriptive piece laden with light somber touch... lovely, sara..:) hugggs! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/21/2012 11:51:00 PM Dear, Sara, love the beauty rain can pass over.. just don't like the dampness......thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/21/2012 8:31:00 PM wondrous visuals Sara.. feeling the view in each line so well written luv.. hope all is well.. I am recovering slowly now.. Ron is typing all for me.. have a drainage tube in my hand from infection.. so hoping it will do the trick.. thankxx for prayers..luv.. Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 1/21/2012 4:51:00 PM you describe the day so well that i am able to see it all from here.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 1/21/2012 2:40:00 PM I love this atmospheric poece, my friend. I must admit, it's my sort of weather Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 1/21/2012 12:32:00 PM I enjoyed your poem, Sara. I really liked your second line " sky covered in gray shawl". Wonderful imagery. Love, KIm Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2012 12:08:00 PM Rain, dark clouds.....Yes,we dream about sun and spring now.Lovely poem Sara,and I like the title:"Rainy Day In Georgia" - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/21/2012 11:54:00 AM This is a wonderful display of a rainy day in Georgia! Very good descriptions, especially of the rain and the clouds and the one liner of Fog was very good fit for this poem! I loved it! Awesome Work! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/21/2012 10:31:00 AM Brook Benton sang about a rainy night in Georgia. You have written about a rainy day in Georgia. This DH vividly describes the Cherokee lands during and after a rainy day. Login to Reply