Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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Rainy Day In Georgia

Menacing dark clouds
Sky covered in gray shawl
Sun peaks through then gone
Hope does not linger
Rain will continue

Mountain ridge of
Army tank green
Light soft beauty 
Crown of dark clouds

Beheld gift
Of beauty
For moment

Dampness
Covers

Fog

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Dinda Minardi January 23, 2012 at 6:47 AM This is wonderful, Sara. I love each line you have here. Full of peacefulness :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 22, 2012 at 12:46 PM Amazing description of this rainy day, Sara. I like the way you personify the sun. Especially liked the way your rainy day drifted into fogginess. This is much like the story of life, my friend. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet January 22, 2012 at 6:22 AM Beautifully written Diminished Hexaverse here Sara.Liked the description of nature very much.

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2012 at 6:10 AM a very descriptive piece laden with light somber touch... lovely, sara..:) hugggs!

Poet Destroyer A January 21, 2012 at 11:51 PM Dear, Sara, love the beauty rain can pass over.. just don't like the dampness......thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 21, 2012 at 8:31 PM wondrous visuals Sara.. feeling the view in each line so well written luv.. hope all is well.. I am recovering slowly now.. Ron is typing all for me.. have a drainage tube in my hand from infection.. so hoping it will do the trick.. thankxx for prayers..luv..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair January 21, 2012 at 4:51 PM you describe the day so well that i am able to see it all from here..

Jack Horne January 21, 2012 at 2:40 PM I love this atmospheric poece, my friend. I must admit, it's my sort of weather

Kim Merryman January 21, 2012 at 12:32 PM I enjoyed your poem, Sara. I really liked your second line " sky covered in gray shawl". Wonderful imagery. Love, KIm

Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2012 at 12:08 PM Rain, dark clouds.....Yes,we dream about sun and spring now.Lovely poem Sara,and I like the title:"Rainy Day In Georgia" - oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey January 21, 2012 at 11:54 AM This is a wonderful display of a rainy day in Georgia! Very good descriptions, especially of the rain and the clouds and the one liner of Fog was very good fit for this poem! I loved it! Awesome Work!

Robert Pettit January 21, 2012 at 10:31 AM Brook Benton sang about a rainy night in Georgia. You have written about a rainy day in Georgia. This DH vividly describes the Cherokee lands during and after a rainy day.