Rainy Day

Through closed eyes i see the world.
for all the strength and weaknesses ,
that haven't even begun
while my eyes lie still .
i can feel the pain and disgust of what could be
and as my eyes rest, the world starts war
war on love and war on revenge
the sky grows dark,
and the clouds take a stroll.
its another stormy day, because my eyes are closed.
when it starts to rain , it really pours
2 blinks from my eyes
and my world is now flooded.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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