Rainy Christmas

Wet and dreamy Merry Christmas to all
No white stuff this year raining like Fall
Dark and dreary brown on the ground
Santa and reindeer from high do surround 
With gifts for the children and adults as well
Lovely wishes from Heaven hearts do swell
But my lover is lost the glue has let go
My Heart is loose no burden to show
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Slaughter Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 2:06 PM
I have no "lover" to contend with, Kelli, but our Christmas snow was a bit premature. It happened on Thursday and will, no doubt, all be gone by Christmas. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, anyway.
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 4:01 PM
Melancholy in its closing but beautiful
White Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Happy Holidays,KJ, thank you kelli
Young Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 4:01 PM
Ouch... "the glue has let go" heartfelt metaphor.
White Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Happy Holidays SY, thank you kelli
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