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rainstorm whips meadows trembling like faded, pale sheets my breath wails with them till a crack on soil appears... awakening newborn grass

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Len Gasun

Date: 8/30/2024 8:24:00 PM

An exquisite poem of hope my dear poet friend Nette. a great winning pice. Thanks for sharing. best wishes always. Hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/26/2024 7:16:00 PM

Love this. Beautiful. God bless you with love, Gina

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/23/2024 4:12:00 AM

We need rain in moderation of course to ensure our crops grow. Hope you're well Nette. Tom

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/22/2024 6:45:00 PM

A silver lining in every dark cloud, as they say. Lovely tanka, Nette! :) Gershon

Ink Empress

Date: 8/22/2024 3:01:00 AM

Dear nette, what i love mostly about your poems and this poem is no exception, is the way you paint imagery in such a flawless manner! I love this tanka! So well written and delivered! I especially love “ rainstorm whips meadows trembling like faded, pale sheets” great entrance to your tanka! Pleasure reading your work. Im sure this will be a top winner