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Rainstorm

Splash! on the cold road Slash! on the glorious grass Making all things wet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 10:35:00 AM
Great use of imagery, I love rainstorms...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2009 5:13:00 PM
I think this is a poem and not a haiku or at least as I understand them. As a poem its' delightful and glorious but I think haiku is reporting and the word 'splash' is not reporting but don't take my word for it. it is cute.
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