Rains of Surreal

There were clouds from the sky
To be a little darker then before
Some thoughts in sacrifice to deny
The ever mist in darken haze to recall

And the walked path was an unsheltered one
He who bears the weight of unnoticed vapour
Should be realized to have unflustered thoughts come undone
For he who thinks will thoughts be flooded lesser!

That be pure and impure to see
For a path of evil may well be a course to undertake
To understand the substances of purity
To then walk perhaps the dream-fill path in wake

As the rain becomes heavier in turn
It only meant for the routes be harder to view
To be drench toward a point of no-return
Guess not the unseen road but be sure of surreal!

Mayhaps an after-rain be of rain an after
To share the affair and to embrace as one… the unknown
And to walk is the path already be taken forever
Yet the rain, hasn’t me to recall of those being shown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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June 26, 2010 at 2:41 PM
This is excellent. I like the words regarding the path and the rain. The rain is so cleaning and highlights the path unless there is a flood. I used to love the trek when I was much younger of playing along the path in the rain. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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June 23, 2010 at 10:08 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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June 21, 2010 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Joel. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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June 20, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featued this week..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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