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Rain's Harp

Massaging the strings as droplets alight Dewy nectar of the rainbow's sunlight Angels' songs take wing -- faithfully On earth mortals dance - in harmony Harp notes tremble in graceful time Arpeggios crescendo to nature's rhyme Whilst the tempest gathers force high above Toward its climax ~ a downpour of love

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/13/2018 9:52:00 PM

Ohhh Gershon, the enchantment of your poem is beyond heaven and above. Your first stanza is full of delicate beauty, like a fine lace.. your second stanza is full of graceful and alluring energy and dynamic imagery that is enthralling and quickened my pulse.. A superb poem with a superb title and an absolutely stunning last line. Love it and I must fave this beauty! Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 6/13/2018 10:42:00 PM

p.s. Best wishes for a win but as you know it's already a winner with me! :))

Susan Ashley
Date: 6/13/2018 10:30:00 PM

Dear Dejected, dry your eyes and blow your nose and then fire your translator.. he's no good! lol! :)))

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 9:57:00 PM

After consulting with my translator, he and I have decided that we guess you didn't care much for the poem. I'll try harder, next time. OK? ~ Dejected in Chicago …………………………...............……………….Sniff, Sniff...…………...…………. Susan! -- A fave? Really? Very humbling for lil' ole me. :) Gershon

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/13/2018 5:41:00 PM

beautifully written, gershon! very poetic!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 7:07:00 PM

Thank you for your words of encouragement, Ilene! ~ Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2018 3:12:00 PM

wow Gershon this is so so beautiful VERY good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 7:01:00 PM

OK, Jan. I'm banking on your kind words flying straight to the sponsor's ears. Thank you for your generous assessment of the poem. As always, :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2018 3:02:00 PM

wow, second one I've seen on this theme. I really need to check out this contest. Looks like you pulled it off very well, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 7:00:00 PM

Go for it with this contest, Andrea! … And as for pulling it off well, I just hope I left something of the poem for the contest! Thank you for you visit and your kind words, Andrea. :) gw

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/13/2018 2:05:00 PM

Lovely Gershon, best wishes...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 6:59:00 PM

Appreciate the visit and the kind words, Charlie! ~ Gershon

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/13/2018 1:50:00 PM

This is really beautiful, Gershon I really enjoyed it !!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for your generous assessment, Mike! ~ gershon