Rain's Harp

Massaging the strings as droplets alight
Dewy nectar of the rainbow's sunlight
Angels' songs take wing -- faithfully
On earth mortals dance - in harmony

Harp notes tremble in graceful time
Arpeggios crescendo to nature's rhyme
Whilst the tempest gathers force high above
Toward its climax ~ a downpour of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/13/2018 9:52:00 PM
Ohhh Gershon, the enchantment of your poem is beyond heaven and above. Your first stanza is full of delicate beauty, like a fine lace.. your second stanza is full of graceful and alluring energy and dynamic imagery that is enthralling and quickened my pulse.. A superb poem with a superb title and an absolutely stunning last line. Love it and I must fave this beauty! Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/13/2018 10:42:00 PM
p.s. Best wishes for a win but as you know it's already a winner with me! :))
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/13/2018 10:30:00 PM
Dear Dejected, dry your eyes and blow your nose and then fire your translator.. he's no good! lol! :)))
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 9:57:00 PM
After consulting with my translator, he and I have decided that we guess you didn't care much for the poem. I'll try harder, next time. OK? ~ Dejected in Chicago …………………………...............……………….Sniff, Sniff...…………...…………. Susan! -- A fave? Really? Very humbling for lil' ole me. :) Gershon
Date: 6/13/2018 5:41:00 PM
beautifully written, gershon! very poetic!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for your words of encouragement, Ilene! ~ Gershon
Date: 6/13/2018 3:12:00 PM
wow Gershon this is so so beautiful VERY good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 7:01:00 PM
OK, Jan. I'm banking on your kind words flying straight to the sponsor's ears. Thank you for your generous assessment of the poem. As always, :) gw
Date: 6/13/2018 3:02:00 PM
wow, second one I've seen on this theme. I really need to check out this contest. Looks like you pulled it off very well, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 7:00:00 PM
Go for it with this contest, Andrea! … And as for pulling it off well, I just hope I left something of the poem for the contest! Thank you for you visit and your kind words, Andrea. :) gw
Date: 6/13/2018 2:05:00 PM
Lovely Gershon, best wishes...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 6:59:00 PM
Appreciate the visit and the kind words, Charlie! ~ Gershon
Date: 6/13/2018 1:50:00 PM
This is really beautiful, Gershon I really enjoyed it !!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2018 6:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your generous assessment, Mike! ~ gershon
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