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Rain's Dance

RAIN’S DANCE Life nearly in hand But lay far from reach Peace I seek Like I was meek Come quickly I pray Like predator dash to prey Death knocks not today I look to live another day In this one thing I hope I hope for a lifelong gone Long gone like summers end Summers end for waking winter As peaceful as war As far as near As high as low As fair as life Smiles sprouting from the crypts You gotta act fast, forget the scripts Only this, catch the drift A day far from here, I lift THE INVINCIBLE PEN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 6:22:00 PM
Love your word play here. Very meaningful 2nd verse.
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:46:00 PM
I like this :)
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:45:00 AM
Hi Pen, i had a rain poem, 2 days ago. I would have enjoyed seeing this peaceful and refreshing feeling on my winning list. i like the Smiles sprouting from the crypts.. line... a perfect 7 poem... Linda
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:50:00 AM
Very good this dance with contradictions typical of an invincible pen!
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