Raining On the Flag

The   American flag waving   proudly on a summer’s day.
A light, May rain   comes suddenly, it is totally unexpected.
The amazing red, white and blue flag should have come down.
It is saturated and alone, wet, cold, devastated, shaming someone.
Whoever should have rescued it will be genuinely sad when they see it.
If I had a hundred foot ladder or rope know-how, it would be down now.
Safe out of the rain, in a warm red barn next to hot chocolate and a cookie.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcferran Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 7:56 PM
This is amazing. Cleverly penned and touching! ;) *clapping*
Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:24 PM
I had so much fun trying to type this the way I wanted.
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