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contest Raining in Summer

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Raining in Summer

The warmest kiss came in the Summer rain
when our kisses were hungry and raindrops fell
passion lived in the moments we'd sustain
that carried our hearts to a lover's well
to quench the longing thirst a kiss restores
as we cast fate into a rainy day
the warm rain invited our souls to soar
into the rain-filled clouds where we will stay
till' we fell to earth with rain down our face
our bodies soaked deep within our core
Summer rain left our lover's trail to trace
in tracks, we left upon the earthen floor
To find in Summer rain a lover's bliss
We burned the lips of passion with each kiss
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Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Very passionate winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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June 6, 2024 at 2:12 AM
Dear frederick what a passionate and soulfully moving take on the prompt. As always your words just flow in such eloquence. You are definitely one of my fave poets here on soup and this poem right here is one that i enjoyed reading too! Rain-hugged words woven in such a descriptive manner. Pleasure reading this. Thank you for your support. Congratulations on your win
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May 18, 2024 at 7:48 AM
You captured the essence of the contest very well in your sonnet which rhymes and flows so well..
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