Raining Down On Me

you stir my thoughts
like this breeze
caressing me

in the distance
melodious songs
fall from chimes
as the sun slips past
the edges of western skies

just beyond view
on the other side
of waking dreams

you lie there
in the reflection
of a million stars
raining down on me

my lips whisper
of silent kisses
amidst these starry skies
in hopes that you
may catch one
as it falls
in the midst
of this december night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/26/2019 5:29:00 PM
Sandy congrats on your top win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/26/2019 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much... hugs
Date: 12/26/2019 9:55:00 AM
What a romantically beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win, Sandra.
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much subimal... :)
Date: 12/25/2019 3:19:00 PM
This is really beautiful Sandra. It is pouring down rain here today and I am loving it! I love your poem my friend. It is going into my Faves! Blessings to you and your family this Christ and New year. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/25/2019 9:32:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...i am happy you liked this one and honored that you faved it.... Merry Christmas to you...i hope you had a blessed holiday my sweet friend... hugs :)
Date: 12/25/2019 12:35:00 PM
Merry Christmas my friend...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/25/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you... Merry Christmas to you as well :) hugs
Date: 12/25/2019 10:12:00 AM
This is so beautifully romantic, Sandy. Hugs
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Date: 12/25/2019 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much John :) hugs
Date: 12/25/2019 3:23:00 AM
If there was ever a poem inspired by star power this is the one Sandra. merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/25/2019 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren... Merry Christmas to you my friend! hugs
Date: 12/24/2019 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful poem. This is calming to me. Soft reflection of fond memories... Well done
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/24/2019 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much...hugs
Date: 12/24/2019 1:28:00 PM
What a beautiful write Sandy, the stars do inspire wonderful, mystical images, you painted the scene so beautifully with your inspired words!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/24/2019 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much John....i wish i could see skies like that every night....sigh... :) hugs
Date: 12/24/2019 7:53:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Sandra, your blessed to have a night filled with amazing stars. I’m blessed with lovely trees but oh the stars...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/24/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Kim my skies are not like this the picture is from my trip to Montana this summer. They have beautiful skies that I wish I could see every night....hugs :)
Date: 12/24/2019 7:12:00 AM
Lovely poem Sandy--enjoyed the read--in imagery you painted.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/24/2019 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay :) hugs
Date: 12/24/2019 5:09:00 AM
you lie there in the reflection of a million stars raining down on me.... That is a lot of light.... those silent kisses are amazing.... Lovely poem.
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Date: 12/24/2019 6:19:00 AM
Thank you my friend ... that Montana sky is like nothing where I live. I was looking at my pictures again the other day and inspired by the skies. It truly looks like millions of stars ... hugs
Date: 12/24/2019 4:50:00 AM
Lovely and romantic, Sandra. Happy Holiday to you and your family :)
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Date: 12/24/2019 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie.. happy holidays to you and yours... Hugs
Date: 12/23/2019 11:15:00 PM
Beautiful and ethereal, thank you for sharing your poem dear Sandra, and Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones.
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Date: 12/24/2019 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Pixie. Merry Christmas to you and yours :) hugs
Date: 12/23/2019 8:51:00 PM
A lovely romantic piece... I enjoyed it and read it twice before fav... Ann
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Date: 12/23/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you so much ...i am honored that you faved this one my kind friend...hugs :)
Date: 12/23/2019 5:39:00 PM
oh my goodness Sandra this is enchanting .. wish i could write amazing poetry like this - adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/23/2019 7:22:00 PM
wow thank you so much Jan...i am honored by your kind words and the faving of the poem... that montana sky inspired my muse...Happy Holidays to you and yours... hugs :)
Date: 12/23/2019 5:18:00 PM
Oh my, this was incredibly beautiful and enchanting my friend. Oh to have these words spoken to me, no other dream would matter. Sigh ~ I am breathless as I wander within your words, wishing to remain here always. Amazing Sandy, your talent shines in every thing you do.
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Date: 12/23/2019 7:23:00 PM
wow... thank you Chris for such a wonderful comment... I hope you and your family have a very Merry Christmas :) hugs
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