Raining Cat and Raccoon

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the door,
it just stood there till forest ranger
knocked to check if widow raccoon was alright.
rain was very nasal that night; so she said
i’m fine with my woolen frock and lights on,
and shut the door and slid on her 
antique couch.
then, a brownie cat from nowhere land jumped
through the sill and landed on widow’s lap.
brownie cat purred and meowed like a violin
in  the middle of some broken refrain. she was
so pretty and had some scratch. widow raccoon
laughed and both had milk with lemon biscuits
for midnight snacks…as night stretched longer,
brownie  took a shower and read  nursery rhymes
with widow till sweet cat purred more with
gentle licks on widow’s prune cheeks. oh, how
raccoon flashed a wide grin for the first time
in years.

facing brownie she said it would
be nice to have dear stray cat for keeps…
canine pet crooned and purred some more
as they slept under tap-taps of rain while tiny
stars gently spun away. morning came; brownie
danced for her mother widow but sprained
her shoulder. i better put some balm on that,
raccoon pulled newfound cat near her chest.
oh, brownie had a name tag and flea collar
around her neck. fluffy kitten couldn’t be hers;
they hugged so tight as teary widow dressed up.
holding brownie on swaying arms, sad raccoon 
swooned, it’s time for you to get home, and opened…
the door.



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(( for Francine Roberts' " Tell Me About It" ))
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 2:10 PM
I have heard of raining cats and dogs, but this one is very funny a very cute write.
George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 5:20 AM
Great story, Nette. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 5:19 AM
Great story, Nette. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:12 PM
Great to see your success in Francine's cute contest. Nette, nice take on the picture. Congratulations on your worthy Hm place. Lol, Agape, Moses
Beck Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 2:17 PM
ok ok slightly better than me THIS TIME.........racoon swoon........violin with broken refrain........where do these gems come from? from my stock..... ( OK EVERYBODY O N L Y J O K I N G ).......sincerely Jock
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Congrats Nette dear friend on your HM in Francine's contest with this awesome creation.. and excellent entry story.. enjoy another great honor all your own luv.. sweet!!! like u..
Johnson Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:43 AM
A nice honest raccoon. Not many of them. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette in Francine Roberts contest "Tell me about it. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:16 AM
wonderful story penned nette, congrats on your HM in the contest
Beck Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:23 AM
marvellous(joke) ......... almost (joke) as (joke) good(joke) as(joke) mine ( joke).....Syd (joke)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Hello Nette dear friend ..hope all is well with u luv and u are enjoying a very blessed day ... thinking about u sweets...
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 9:29 PM
This is such a precious tale you made for that picture. I really enjoy your take on it and I hope it does well in the contest, nette!
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 11:51 AM
I see you all found some inspiration while I was not at the Soup this weekend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Nette. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 11:50 AM
I enjoyed a very interesting tale, nette
Devonshire Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Aww, I wanted them to stay together, Nette! This is such an entertaining poem and the title made me laugh out loud! I'm sure this will be a winner, dear. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Cute and cuddly write Nette my friend.. a rousing tale of friendship and fun and care and love ..luv.. good luck in the contest.. I like the way u opened and closed the poem with the door.. sweet .. amazing as always u enthrall me luv..
Mannan Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 5:55 AM
What a tale Nette dear. Wanted it to go on and on.
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 4:27 AM
Very creative work that tells a great love story..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morning.Thanks for stopping by with uplifting words.Sara
Horsman Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 1:27 AM
What wondeful imagery, Nette. this is a brilliant entry in to the contest. good luck. Harry
Onclaud Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:02 AM
i updated it twice to make sure you got it, dear francine... let me know if it's with you! :) hugggs
Roberts Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 11:23 PM
thanks for entering my contest nette, it isn't showing up on the contest page yet, please check that you have entered it
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