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Raining Again

RAINING AGAIN Raw, as onions cut into the whites of my eyes, And tears sting and stream at this Indignant hour, way before Nine. Actually the number slipped upside down In the incessant rain - a Neverland of sleep that Gobbles up one hour of time. And the anchors of the media want this practice Gone, kaput. Ancient happenings In another time but Not kept up at this incessantly ridiculous rate. 3/11/2018

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Date: 3/11/2018 5:49:00 PM
We should be grateful for a bit of rain ,but just enough. Great acrostic Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 3/11/2018 8:03:00 AM
Always raining here Kim... Great acrostic..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2018 9:57:00 AM
Previously in serious drought. The rain in the last two years makes up for it! Thanks!
Date: 3/11/2018 7:57:00 AM
What a great Acrostic Kim. I don't mind the rain or the media but - Onions - my eyes rain torrents. Great write...Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, Maria!

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