Rainfall

Hiding alone in the shadows guarded, trusting no one silently watching, waiting Is life worth living? Can anyone save him? His vision clouded, blurred The sunless skies have him confused Rainfall begins a drenching and soaking rain pours down flooding the autumn bonfires Which blazed in once upon a time with ardent passion in the dense forest of happily ever afters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:23 AM
powerful piece of writing love how you drew this dear friend
Lamoureux Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 9:24 AM
I am glad I stopped by this morning, another exceptional piece.
Yvonne Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Great write, sad and dark but the poetic flair was maintained.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 11:41 AM
7 all the way....I must say, I'm a sucker for free verse. This was a fabulous write. The tone and the imagery is awesome... What's life without rainfalls?!
Manassian Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Hmmmmmm....interesting write here. So much truth. Good one.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:33 PM
It is terrible to be in such a dark place. Thankfully the sun WILL shine again. It's always worth waiting for.
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