Raindrops NOT FOR CONTEST

Red eyes
Anxious cries
Indigo tears
Neon fears
Dead dreams
Rippled streams
Onyx heart
Poisonous thoughts
Shadows dark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Warlov Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 12:32 AM
Man! Striking combinations. The power of economy and sudden juxtaposition of discordant imagery suggests a cloudy danger approaching. Spooky good! [ FAV ]
Warlov Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 10:59 PM
Imagining these characteristics in a person and a kaleidoscopic catalog of an event is like catnip to a fertile mind! Super cool.
Jones Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 12:47 AM
So honored you fav it! Thank you Robert!
George Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 9:58 PM
Lovely little poem....dear Karen. Enjoyed the rhythmic beat and assonance of sounds.
Jones Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 3:58 AM
Thanks Valsa!
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