Raindrops NOT FOR CONTEST

Red eyes Anxious cries Indigo tears Neon fears Dead dreams Rippled streams Onyx heart Poisonous thoughts Shadows dark

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Robert Warlov

Date: 6/20/2024 12:32:00 AM

Man! Striking combinations. The power of economy and sudden juxtaposition of discordant imagery suggests a cloudy danger approaching. Spooky good! [ FAV ]

Robert Warlov
Date: 6/20/2024 10:59:00 PM

Imagining these characteristics in a person and a kaleidoscopic catalog of an event is like catnip to a fertile mind! Super cool.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/20/2024 12:47:00 AM

So honored you fav it! Thank you Robert!

Valsa George

Date: 6/17/2024 9:58:00 PM

Lovely little poem....dear Karen. Enjoyed the rhythmic beat and assonance of sounds.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/18/2024 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Valsa!