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Raindrops Mixed With Tears

Raindrops paint a muted reflection on my front window pane. Wails come from a thunderous sky; I wipe away my tears again. The summer sun melts my mask and a still breaking heart. Raindrops fall cleansing the earth, I resign to make a fresh start. Violent storms defined my summer, autumn rain renews my soul. Drops create a clear reflection, a smile and precious life extolled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/2/2012 10:47:00 AM
bittersweet the charm of this, rhonda... special congrats on your super win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/1/2012 11:19:00 AM
RHONDA, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:57:00 PM
Hope the rain has washed away all sadness. Congratulations on a lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:12:00 PM
Thanx, Rhonda, and congrats to you..I love this cute little poem, luv, :) Jag
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:56:00 PM
Such an affect the weather has on us, the weather, the moon, the tide..truely we are all from one source. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/30/2012 3:06:00 PM
beautiful and what a great way to look at the rain, from seasons, and what it means. Love it. Lee
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Date: 8/30/2012 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda a super win xx
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Rhonda. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2012 1:37:00 PM
Lovely poetry...you made me smile. Cynthia
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Date: 8/19/2012 9:35:00 PM
What a teary and sad write that leads to joy and happiness in the end! The power of tears and smiles expressed within your powerful poem is tremendous Rhonda! This is quite a descriptive image, your poem, I love every line of it! What a fabulous piece my friend, Great Work!!
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