Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Couplet

Raindrops Mixed With Tears

Raindrops paint a muted reflection on my front window pane.
Wails come from a thunderous sky; I wipe away my tears again.

The summer sun melts my mask and a still breaking heart.
Raindrops fall cleansing the earth, I resign to make a fresh start.

Violent storms defined my summer, autumn rain renews my soul.
Drops create a clear reflection, a smile and precious life extolled.

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Nette Onclaud September 2, 2012 at 10:47 AM bittersweet the charm of this, rhonda... special congrats on your super win!..:) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 11:19 AM RHONDA, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

Joyce Johnson August 30, 2012 at 7:57 PM Hope the rain has washed away all sadness. Congratulations on a lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 30, 2012 at 7:12 PM Thanx, Rhonda, and congrats to you..I love this cute little poem, luv, :) Jag

Debbie Guzzi August 30, 2012 at 6:56 PM Such an affect the weather has on us, the weather, the moon, the tide..truely we are all from one source. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Lee Ramage August 30, 2012 at 3:06 PM beautiful and what a great way to look at the rain, from seasons, and what it means. Love it. Lee

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 30, 2012 at 1:00 PM Congratulations Rhonda a super win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 12:06 PM Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Rhonda. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Cynthia Alvez August 20, 2012 at 1:37 PM Lovely poetry...you made me smile. Cynthia

Russell Sivey August 19, 2012 at 9:35 PM What a teary and sad write that leads to joy and happiness in the end! The power of tears and smiles expressed within your powerful poem is tremendous Rhonda! This is quite a descriptive image, your poem, I love every line of it! What a fabulous piece my friend, Great Work!!