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Raindrops Lachrymose

Splashes levels drains cerulean aquifer Azure axioms encapsulation in crystalline shimmer Ping tumultuous sapphire in a thunderously storm Lightning in sand castle amassing the goblet Chalice of oasis with a puff of condensation Rivulets fuse in mass of mercury river Flows in forks down cheeks to waterfall Ripple on the petal of a black rose To bend and lachrymose below

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/24/2024 5:40:00 PM

"Flows in forks down cheeks to waterfall" what an image-

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/25/2024 3:42:00 AM

Thank you

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/14/2024 10:33:00 PM

"cerulean aquifer", "crystalline shimmer", "Chalice of oasis" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/15/2024 3:05:00 AM

Thank you

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/14/2024 9:31:00 PM

'rivulets fuse in mass of mercury river' beautiful line that made me read over and over again. Happy writing, congratulations.

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/15/2024 3:05:00 AM

Thank you

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/14/2024 9:43:00 AM

As usual you add your flare and delicious words I have to look up! I love it though! I try to choose one or two I like and memorize them! Loved how your words took us along the path of the raindrops! Xo

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/15/2024 3:06:00 AM

Thank you,I love words they are my favorite thing, so many for the smallest things