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Raindrops Falling

When I was a kid, I often saw the rain My mom said that the sky is crying I wanted to console the clouds in the sky Catching its tears, I never stopped trying As I went to school, rains were fun We splashed the water and danced along Falling in the mud on purpose was cool I and my friends sung the raindrop song When teenage hit me at its large Rain was the most romantic fall I held his hand and walked in the rain Enjoying the raindrops-large and small As I grow old, I’ll avoid the cloudburst The raindrops will be nothing but pain I’ll curse the mud and traffic and moss But still inside I’ll love the rain I’ll long to see the raindrops’ train

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/12/2012 9:56:00 AM
great poem,i also love the rain!
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Date: 9/1/2012 11:36:00 AM
APROORVA, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
thanks pd :)
Date: 8/30/2012 9:12:00 PM
Oh no. The rain will still be a blessing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
thankyou joyce
Date: 8/30/2012 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations Apoorva a super win xx
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
thaks mandy!
Date: 8/30/2012 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Apoorva. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
thanks carol
Date: 8/19/2012 7:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Apoorva. I like how you showed the different feelings toward the rain at different times in your life. Love, Kim
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/26/2012 11:52:00 AM
thnks.
Date: 8/19/2012 4:22:00 AM
Apoorva childhood happiness is difficult to lose...I like..David
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