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Raindrops Fall Like Teardrops

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
as this child's fear of the unknown
fills his heart with doom
His life is balanced with only gloom
Never smiles Never talks
Only pain as he walks

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
as he hides the bruise's beneath his clothes
Broken an blue as he is abused
Never knowing always confused

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
As he pretends ever things alright
He suffers ever night
From the hands of someone dear
His life is full of fear

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
as the pains to much to bare
he takes his life as no one cares

The Raindrops stop with no Teardrops found
his life meant nothing to no one who cared
Love an hurt are in the same
someones life is not a game.

Copyright © Anita Harris | Year Posted 2016

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Paul Callus Date: 4/10/2016 2:47:00 PM Hi Anita! This your first contribution to Soup comes with strong emotions; sadness and pain prevail throughout; the repeated first line of each stanza is very effective. Thank you for visiting my poem! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 4/10/2016 5:48:00 PM Thank you dear friend.

Madalyn Rosario Date: 3/28/2016 10:29:00 AM A very sad, well written poem. Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 4/10/2016 5:48:00 PM Thank you friend

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/27/2016 2:38:00 PM Powerful but sad piece Anita, really well penned grabs one's attention spot on with nice rhyme too. Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 4/10/2016 5:48:00 PM Thank you friend

Shaunda Lindsay Date: 3/17/2016 12:33:00 AM So very sad but this type of thing needs to be talked about. This is a wonderful piece. Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 4/10/2016 5:48:00 PM Thank you sister

Funom Makama Date: 3/15/2016 12:32:00 PM The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 3/15/2016 2:22:00 PM Thank you dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2016 12:33:00 PM - Thank you for your first poem, Anita :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 3/15/2016 2:05:00 AM Thank you friend

Skat A Date: 3/14/2016 11:38:00 AM Anita Harris, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 4/10/2016 5:49:00 PM Thank you sweet friend.

Charlie Smith Date: 3/13/2016 8:00:00 PM So sad. Welcome to the neighborhood Anita. I look forward to more of your work... Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 3/13/2016 8:04:00 PM Thank you friend.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/13/2016 4:31:00 PM Anita, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Anita Harris Date: 3/13/2016 4:38:00 PM Thank you so much, I will enjoy reading an posting more, many thanks to you an everyone here.