Anita Harris Poet Epic

Raindrops Fall Like Teardrops

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
as this child's fear of the unknown
fills his heart with doom
His life is balanced with only gloom
Never smiles Never talks
Only pain as he walks

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
as he hides the bruise's beneath his clothes
Broken an blue as he is abused
Never knowing always confused

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
As he pretends ever things alright
He suffers ever night
From the hands of someone dear
His life is full of fear

Raindrops fall down like Teardrops
as the pains to much to bare
he takes his life as no one cares

The Raindrops stop with no Teardrops found
his life meant nothing to no one who cared
Love an hurt are in the same
someones life is not a game.

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Paul Callus April 10, 2016 at 2:47 PM Hi Anita! This your first contribution to Soup comes with strong emotions; sadness and pain prevail throughout; the repeated first line of each stanza is very effective. Thank you for visiting my poem! ~ Regards // paul Anita Harris April 10, 2016 at 5:48 PM Thank you dear friend.

Madalyn Rosario March 28, 2016 at 10:29 AM A very sad, well written poem. Anita Harris April 10, 2016 at 5:48 PM Thank you friend

Gordon Mcconnell March 27, 2016 at 2:38 PM Powerful but sad piece Anita, really well penned grabs one's attention spot on with nice rhyme too. Anita Harris April 10, 2016 at 5:48 PM Thank you friend

Shaunda Lindsay March 17, 2016 at 12:33 AM So very sad but this type of thing needs to be talked about. This is a wonderful piece. Anita Harris April 10, 2016 at 5:48 PM Thank you sister

Funom Makama March 15, 2016 at 12:32 PM The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece Anita Harris March 15, 2016 at 2:22 PM Thank you dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2016 at 12:33 PM - Thank you for your first poem, Anita :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anita Harris March 15, 2016 at 2:05 AM Thank you friend

Skat A March 14, 2016 at 11:38 AM Anita Harris, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Anita Harris April 10, 2016 at 5:49 PM Thank you sweet friend.

Charlie Smith March 13, 2016 at 8:00 PM So sad. Welcome to the neighborhood Anita. I look forward to more of your work... Anita Harris March 13, 2016 at 8:04 PM Thank you friend.

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2016 at 4:31 PM Anita, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Anita Harris March 13, 2016 at 4:38 PM Thank you so much, I will enjoy reading an posting more, many thanks to you an everyone here.