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Rivulets of rain run down my misty window pane All day long the cats and dogs have teemed down I really need some sunshine on my pale skin Non-stop rain makes me feel chilled to the bone Drip, drip, drip, crystal teardrops fall from the sky Rivers are swollen I hope there is no more flooding Overcoats and wellies are worn by everyone Please can the rain stop falling Summer sunshine you are welcome to come and visit us soon 22nd July 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 8/28/2015 4:01:00 PM

Not been the greatest of Summers, thank the Lord for a country called the Philippines. Love the image Jan, and there's always next year, gulp!! ~~ hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 4:23:00 PM

Been a dire summer here James - wish I could come with you next time you go lol:-) hugs jan x

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

This is a great acrostic Jan! -loved that crystal teardrops fall from the sky-

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thanks Cas - that's one of my fave lines too:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 10:41:00 PM

Jan, my senses you filled with your poem...!!! however, I agree that please no flood as not only persons suffer but also the little creatures... hugs!~Olive Eloisa =')

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 2:38:00 AM

I just fell in love with the picture when i was looking for one to go with the picture :-) Thankfully we do not get flooding often - the last time was when we had VERY strong winds and high tides and there were homes badly damaged from the water - the pictures of people canoeing along one of the high streets in the North of the Island have always stuck in my head! hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/23/2015 3:08:00 PM

There can be a sadness in the rain. You have expressed that melancholy feeling wonderfully in your poem Jan. I will send you some of this Hawaiian heat we are having. Cheers, Connie

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 3:13:00 PM

oh please do send some sunshine but not too hot I am not a great sun worshiper but I would like it a few degrees warmer:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 7/23/2015 2:00:00 PM

I didn't notice the acrostic because I was so caught up in the wonderful imagery. First rate, Jan, as is your custom. Hugs always.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Paul for you kind comment:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/23/2015 12:44:00 PM

- I believe you sat by MY window when you wrote this, dear Jan - A great poem, to the sun - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 2:33:00 PM

Happy birthday Anne lise I do hope the sun shines for you today:-) hugs janxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/23/2015 11:01:00 AM

We are missing the rain here as the temperature is from 35 and up! A wonderful acrostic very poetically expressed, dear Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 11:04:00 AM

Can you send a few rays of sunshine this way please - but not too hot I like it about 22 - 23 degrees:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 7/23/2015 10:39:00 AM

When it rains I open a bottle of champagne – in no time my life is sunny and warm! At the moment we are frying in summer heat. Thanks for pointing out my misspelling of harmony. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 10:41:00 AM

I rarely drink Maurice .... but I do like the odd glass of champagne:-) hugss Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/23/2015 9:58:00 AM

I know the feeling Jan. Yesterday we had such heavy rainfall accompanied by ice particles. Imagine a tropical country getting ice rain. Your acrostic has a good flow - one doesn't realize it until I see the form. Good one, Jan! hugs :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim - we actually have had a dry sunny morning which was so welcome - mum and I went for a longggggggggggg walk:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/23/2015 8:16:00 AM

Must try one of these acrostics! This is excellent and NO SMUTTY STUFF! I'm impressed my dear Jan!!! Love, Jack xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 8:18:00 AM

LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/23/2015 2:54:00 AM

how timely and splendid, jan.. we just had 3 hours of non-stop rain last night, and the whole region was afloat.. ohh so fine.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 3:00:00 AM

I was craving sunshine Nette and today it is glorious so I will walk down and take mum to the church coffee morning:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Strand

Date: 7/23/2015 2:22:00 AM

Thank you for your always welcome comments on my endeavours.rgds Brian

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 2:23:00 AM

I must pop by and listen to you reciting the poems too:-) hugs jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/23/2015 1:14:00 AM

I love rain. Excellent and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 1:59:00 AM

I like rain but a bit of sunshine would be welcome too:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2015 11:33:00 PM

oh dear, is this what is happening on your lovely island? DANG!! We are getting a bit of rain too, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 1:58:00 AM

Yes but seeing the comments others are getting rain too:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/22/2015 6:42:00 PM

Hello Jan... we need the rain, but boy-o-boy, if it is constant day after day it can be depressing. It is winter here Jan, but its a blue sunny sky today; I'll see if I can send some of it up to you. Regards - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2015 6:43:00 PM

ooh thanks Lindsay - a few days of blue sky and sunshine is just what the doctor ordered:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/22/2015 6:32:00 PM

Jan, you sure can pen a beautiful poem, a shining 7 and thanks for visiting my muse poem

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2015 6:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/22/2015 6:29:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Jan, a 7. I'm glad the weather has been great here they even mentioned yesterday no drought. Though my aunt in Calif. said they desperately need water people are even hiring to have the grass painted green. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2015 6:37:00 PM

They are welcome to have some of our rain and dreary dull days Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2015 4:54:00 PM

Rain rain go away.... we had a couple weeks of rain but now we've had 6 days of sun...I do like the sunny days better

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2015 4:58:00 PM

Oh me too Tim - we have unsettled weather all week - just a few sunny days would lift our spirits :-) hugs jan xx