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Raindrops

All the ground is chill and damp, The pines entwined with morning mist. Last night the stormclouds left their stamp, These raindrops which the dust has missed; And I, the chill and damp of morning mist. Each needle of the mighty pines Is tipped with wondrous light; Pretty rows of lines and lines Of sparkly prisms beaming bright- Lines and lines of wondrous light. Every moment, few by few, These raindrops tumble thro' the air, Thro' the mist, to meet the dew, Making leaves so pretty, resting there: Few by few, so pretty resting there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/14/2021 9:01:00 AM
I love the rain and I certainly love this beauty! Great job capturing the moment Isaiah!
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:35:00 PM
Isaiah, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/18/2015 4:25:00 PM
Beautifully written, Isaiah! Congratulations for your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:52:00 AM
Beautiful, congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on the win! Janet
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:55:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Isaiah:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:14:00 AM
A wonderful description of nature's beauty. I wish that I were more of a morning person, so I could see it for myself... Beautifully written, Isaiah. I enjoyed your poem very much!
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:42:00 PM
wow, this is really nice. I like how you repeated the last two phrases. Oh, NOW I see, it's one of those water poems for Craig's contest. Eileen sure did inspire us with a wonderful form. It's not obvious what it is, and that makes it a great form.
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:40:00 PM
Methinks there is a raindrops contest afloat This is not the first one I have seen tonight. I better go check contest page. Let me read this one now!
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Date: 1/16/2015 2:59:00 PM
Raindrops, God's tears on His creation. When frozen, his jewels for decoration. Nice write my friend. God Bless. D.
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Date: 1/16/2015 12:07:00 PM
Very nice pen Isaiah ! I enjoyed reading your piece, Raindrops , dear friend. A 7 from me! Lots of imagery. Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!xxxx D. ^O^
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Date: 1/16/2015 9:40:00 AM
This is a spirited piece that deals with nature in all her beauty. Well done. Emile. #7
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Date: 1/16/2015 2:36:00 AM
awesome!
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Date: 1/15/2015 7:09:00 PM
Nice one, Isaiah. Lovely imagery. Glad you are using this form! ;)
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Date: 1/15/2015 7:09:00 PM
Well Done Isaiah, flows freely and captures a wonderful sense of a spring rain.
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Date: 1/15/2015 5:12:00 PM
Such vibrant imagery Isaiah! I can picture the diamond like rain drops in my head. I had my first attempt at this form a few days ago - its fun:-) hugs jan xx A 7 from me and put you into my faves:-)
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