Raindrops 2

Quote by poet: "Love child of Cloud & Air, Raindrop holds a sea of bliss & ire."

Clouds saunter along this low mountains
Caressing all the tall trees, they murmur nice on their way.

Moving as to go away, they speed up to hug
Again just to split to dance pretty once again.

Ah, tall trees do love the clouds, sway more
When they see them carry a thousand drops of rain.

Choicest drops are those that stay and slide on
Them from top to toe, Grassroots blushes away.

Jealous air steals off these clouds to lower place
It rains and rains and rains here, Mawsynram is its name.

Leaves here wear raindrops Twelve months a year
Rain is at home, for Sun ah! this is awkward in-laws place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radice Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 12:11 AM
I've read both 'Raindrops' and 'Raindrops 2' together and they make for excellent reading. You write thriveni with such skill and imagination and bring nature and places to life. Cheers - Gary
mysore Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Your kind words make me float! Thank you for your visit and for reading the rain!Ah. I am so grateful for your time. Blessings & cheers.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raindrops 2" write.  I love your line, "Leaves here wear raindrops Twelve months a year." They Do... Have a wonderful day with your win.
mysore Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:10 PM
thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am so glad you liked it. thanks for the wishes. Cheers.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 2:44 AM
Well done! Congratulations!
mysore Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:09 PM
thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I appreciate your congratulatory words. thank you. Cheers.
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Very nice! Congratulations ! :)
mysore Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 9:26 PM
thank you dear poet. your words of appreciation and kind visit is joy for me. Thank you. Cheers.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:57 PM
Lovely work, Enjoyed so much. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
mysore Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 9:25 PM
I am grateful for your kind visit and words dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. Cheers.
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:20 PM
"Jealous air", "Grassroots blush", "awkward in-laws" - Beautiful work. Congratulations!
mysore Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 9:21 PM
Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. Thank you for the appreciation. Blessings & cheers.
Kerr Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:16 PM
A magnificent take on the contest title, thriveni. Congratulations on your first place podium medal with a poem that oozes literary charm and imagery germane to the subject matter. Wishing you every success in all your other endeavours Howard
mysore Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 9:22 PM
dear poet, your kind words brings me so much joy. Thank you for your happy visit. Blessings & cheers.
Crandall Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Great poem, a new way to think of clouds and rain and trees and sun!
mysore Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:33 PM
It is! glad you liked it dear poet. You should visit Khasi hills in Meghalaya & Mawsynram to feel the rain really, you can catch clouds Anytime. ha. I appreciate your visit & words here, Cheers.
Narain Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Nice poem. Congrats on placement.
mysore Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind visit.Cheers.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful poem on raindrops, Dear Triveni. I love rain...and for me, raindrops are very nostalgic! Best wishes ~ Mala
mysore Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 7:10 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it. Cheers.
Allison Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 2:47 AM
i love the use of personification with the clouds caressing hugging and dancing, not sure I'd like to live where the leaves wear raindrops 12 months a year! fab poem Thriveni:-) hugs Jan xx
mysore Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Thank you for your kind visit. I am so glad that you liked it. It is good to know there is such a place,Mawsynram, amazing isn't it? In SouthIndia, there are some places where it will rain all through 6 months! But as you say, 12 months is bit heavy on one's mind. Thanks again. Blessings & Cheers
George Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 4:27 AM
You have introduced a lot of variety in your viewing of raindrops. I liked your quote describing rain as the love child of cloud and air. The last line made me smile.
mysore Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 4:55 AM
You liked it! thank you for your kind thoughts dear poet. You made me happy today. Cheers
Rose  Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Sometimes in laws are like walking on egg shells all the time, I enjoyed your poem, :)
mysore Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:39 PM
You caught me with wonderful expression, 'walking on egg shells' I am all smiles here dear poet, thank you for visiting, I am happy by your kindness. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 8:39 AM
You’ve described an interesting scene! 12 months a year…awkwar in-laws place…wow!
mysore Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:38 PM
Yes dear poet, name of the place is Mawsynram, in NE India. It is the wettest place in the world, rains always. Thank you for your kind visit. It brings me joy. Blessings.
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