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Raindrops 2

Quote by poet: "Love child of Cloud & Air, Raindrop holds a sea of bliss & ire."

Clouds saunter along this low mountains
Caressing all the tall trees, they murmur nice on their way.

Moving as to go away, they speed up to hug
Again just to split to dance pretty once again.

Ah, tall trees do love the clouds, sway more
When they see them carry a thousand drops of rain.

Choicest drops are those that stay and slide on
Them from top to toe, Grassroots blushes away.

Jealous air steals off these clouds to lower place
It rains and rains and rains here, Mawsynram is its name.

Leaves here wear raindrops Twelve months a year
Rain is at home, for Sun ah! this is awkward in-laws place.

Copyright © thriveni c mysore | Year Posted 2024

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Gary Radice Date: 8/1/2024 12:11:00 AM I've read both 'Raindrops' and 'Raindrops 2' together and they make for excellent reading. You write thriveni with such skill and imagination and bring nature and places to life. Cheers - Gary Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 8/1/2024 6:49:00 AM Your kind words make me float! Thank you for your visit and for reading the rain!Ah. I am so grateful for your time. Blessings & cheers.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/16/2024 9:56:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raindrops 2" write.  I love your line, "Leaves here wear raindrops Twelve months a year." They Do... Have a wonderful day with your win. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/16/2024 8:10:00 PM thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am so glad you liked it. thanks for the wishes. Cheers.

Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 7/16/2024 2:44:00 AM Well done! Congratulations! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/16/2024 8:09:00 PM thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I appreciate your congratulatory words. thank you. Cheers.

Heidi Sands Date: 7/15/2024 5:56:00 AM Very nice! Congratulations ! :) Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/15/2024 9:26:00 PM thank you dear poet. your words of appreciation and kind visit is joy for me. Thank you. Cheers.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/14/2024 10:57:00 PM Lovely work, Enjoyed so much. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/15/2024 9:25:00 PM I am grateful for your kind visit and words dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. Cheers.

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/14/2024 10:20:00 PM "Jealous air", "Grassroots blush", "awkward in-laws" - Beautiful work. Congratulations! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/15/2024 9:21:00 PM Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. Thank you for the appreciation. Blessings & cheers.

Howard Kerr Date: 7/14/2024 10:16:00 PM A magnificent take on the contest title, thriveni. Congratulations on your first place podium medal with a poem that oozes literary charm and imagery germane to the subject matter. Wishing you every success in all your other endeavours Howard Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/15/2024 9:22:00 PM dear poet, your kind words brings me so much joy. Thank you for your happy visit. Blessings & cheers.

David Crandall Date: 7/14/2024 10:42:00 AM Great poem, a new way to think of clouds and rain and trees and sun! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/14/2024 8:33:00 PM It is! glad you liked it dear poet. You should visit Khasi hills in Meghalaya & Mawsynram to feel the rain really, you can catch clouds Anytime. ha. I appreciate your visit & words here, Cheers.

Jay Narain Date: 7/14/2024 10:20:00 AM Nice poem. Congrats on placement. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/14/2024 8:25:00 PM Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind visit.Cheers.

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/4/2024 7:29:00 AM Enjoyed your beautiful poem on raindrops, Dear Triveni. I love rain...and for me, raindrops are very nostalgic! Best wishes ~ Mala Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/4/2024 7:10:00 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it. Cheers.

Jan Allison Date: 7/4/2024 2:47:00 AM i love the use of personification with the clouds caressing hugging and dancing, not sure I'd like to live where the leaves wear raindrops 12 months a year! fab poem Thriveni:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/4/2024 5:18:00 AM Thank you for your kind visit. I am so glad that you liked it. It is good to know there is such a place,Mawsynram, amazing isn't it? In SouthIndia, there are some places where it will rain all through 6 months! But as you say, 12 months is bit heavy on one's mind. Thanks again. Blessings & Cheers

Valsa George Date: 7/3/2024 4:27:00 AM You have introduced a lot of variety in your viewing of raindrops. I liked your quote describing rain as the love child of cloud and air. The last line made me smile. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/3/2024 4:55:00 AM You liked it! thank you for your kind thoughts dear poet. You made me happy today. Cheers

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/2/2024 9:36:00 AM Sometimes in laws are like walking on egg shells all the time, I enjoyed your poem, :) Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/2/2024 9:39:00 PM You caught me with wonderful expression, 'walking on egg shells' I am all smiles here dear poet, thank you for visiting, I am happy by your kindness. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/2/2024 8:39:00 AM You’ve described an interesting scene! 12 months a year…awkwar in-laws place…wow! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 7/2/2024 9:38:00 PM Yes dear poet, name of the place is Mawsynram, in NE India. It is the wettest place in the world, rains always. Thank you for your kind visit. It brings me joy. Blessings.