Raindrops 2 Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul - 07/02/24
Fictional poem for contest
Brooding nimbus darken the sky suddenly clouds burst Rain drops thunder down then subside to a gentle pitter patter on the Perspex conservatory roof I watch as raging rivulets of rain run down the windows and hear the old drains gurgling at the deluge of water I peer outside as the pitter pattering ceases to see the sun She’s playing peek a boo from behind a cloud Huge puddles have formed on the stone flags Millie, my young granddaughter grabs my hand “Come on grandma, grab your wellies” she giggles “Let’s go out and jump in the puddles”.. And so we did!
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