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Raindrops

Has there been any relief to the heat where you live? - Speaks Volumes W'en it is raining here It brings so much joy First raindrops vanish Into the parched earth Young bird wonders At the gentle shower This is her first rain ever. Stag party of the Sun Is over now, a young Flower girl has thrown A gentle shower down I hear dearest bride, Rain, Laughing with her friends Somewhere in the ocean I wait, we all wait For her to arrive With her longest train It is worth the wait To watch the now shy, Well - behaved groom smile. W'en, rain is joy here, we all smile.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2024 4:12:00 AM

I am delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. It is nice here this morning which is wonderful but they say it won't last long but thank God from Whom all blessings flow some cool. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/2/2024 5:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate your thoughts. I loved your dancing raindrops too. Happy writing. Blessings & cheers

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/29/2024 9:06:00 AM

Wonderful imagery of the wedding and my favorite line..."I hear dearest bride, Rain, Laughing with her friends Somewhere in the ocean" I can shut my eyes and hear the sound rain makes a it patters into ocean water and how that could bethe sound of rain laughing is magic. Xoxo

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/29/2024 6:56:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit. I am glad that you like the poem. Your thoughts add so much to my joy of writing dear poet. I am grateful for that. happy writing.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/25/2024 6:57:00 PM

Dear Thriveni, I was captivated by your unique imagery in describing the rain. Beautiful! Love the last line for a wonderful finale! Congratulations for your win in Jcb's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/25/2024 7:19:00 PM

I am so humbled by your kind words and wishes dear poet. Thank you.Thank you very much. Cheers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2024 9:20:00 AM

This is really cool how you made personification of rain like members of a wedding party!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/23/2024 8:48:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it. Cheers.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/18/2024 6:22:00 AM

That is lovely my sweet friend. The thought that is in every line is delightful. From the baby bird to the Wedding procession, its really magic. I have never seen rain depicted so imaginatively. You have a real talent. I haven't been reading much lately. In the next week I will spend time reading more, and commenting. Thank you my sweet friend.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/18/2024 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for your precious words dear poet friend. Be blessed.