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"Rain is God's tears upon us." Quote By Poet


Raindrops coming down~a very tearful God

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Jay Narain

Date: 7/1/2024 11:50:00 AM

Nice work and a win in contest.

Tonye George

Date: 6/25/2024 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:42:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Glad to see you. Have a great day writing away......................

Valsa George

Date: 6/25/2024 8:20:00 PM

Paula, Congratulations on your win. Liked your monoku as well as your quote.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:41:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" monoku write with quote. Few words here but it is how I feel. It was fun to bring to life. Have a great day writing away......................

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/25/2024 6:08:00 PM

Dear Paula, both your quote and your monoku are beautifully touching. Congratulations for your win in Jcb's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:39:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" monoku write/quote. I enjoyed writing this one. It has few words but it is how I feel. Have a great day writing away......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2024 2:20:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning work ...Way to go. I have always heard that God saves our teardrops in a bottle. Thanks for sharing your winner with us. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:36:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you came back to read my "Raindrops" again. Always great to see you. I do not know about the bottle "But" I do know He takes care of us when we cry. I have seen this many times. Have a great day writing away......................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/25/2024 1:52:00 PM

What a blessed, stunning awesome poem, dear friend Congrats, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:30:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you found my "Raindrops" write to be a blessed, stunning awesome poem. It has few words but it is how I feel. Hugs... Have a great day writing away......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2024 1:16:00 PM

Back with my congrats as well, dearie.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:27:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write again. Also glad to see you back. Have a great day writing away......................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/25/2024 11:34:00 AM

Hi Paula! Back with congratulations for your win with this poem of pensive wisdom. So happy for you. Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:25:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you found my "Raindrops" to be a poem of pensive wisdom. Also glad you came back to read again. Always great to see you. "Blessings" Have a great day writing away......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/25/2024 7:53:00 AM

"3 Place" Raindrops~Date Written:6/17/2024

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2024 9:37:00 AM

I like both the quote and the monoku very much

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2024 10:19:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed both my "Raindrops" Monoku write & my quote. Have a great day writing away.....................

Ink Empress

Date: 6/23/2024 2:37:00 AM

Yes when it rains, sometimes i wonder if heaven is weeping: what a deep monoku this is. Brilliant paula. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Raindrops" monoku write to be Brilliant. Yes, heaven is weeping... Have a great day writing away......................

Len Gasun

Date: 6/23/2024 1:10:00 AM

Lovely monuko my dear poet friend Paula. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always. God bless! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2024 10:14:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" Monoku write. I feel it is true. Hugs... Have a great day writing away.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/22/2024 10:08:00 PM

Your poem is beautifully written, Paula. The rain just began to fall here. Best of wishes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2024 10:12:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my "Raindrops" write to be beautifully written. We need rain here. Maybe this week.... Have a great day writing away......................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2024 9:47:00 AM

Ohhh, this happens when we somehow stray...grreat job expressing your view in short words! Blessings if for line's contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2024 10:10:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. I enjoyed bringing this one line/quote to life.... Have a great day writing away.....................

Jack Horne

Date: 6/22/2024 6:17:00 AM

oh, so much said here in so few words - very powerful piece indeed

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/22/2024 8:20:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my powerful "Raindrops" write. Words can be powerful... Have a great day writing away.....................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/20/2024 5:42:00 PM

This is a deeply spiritual poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2024 8:17:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Yes, deeply spiritual... Have a great day writing away.....................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/20/2024 12:57:00 PM

There is a deep seeded sadness in your words as I think about how God feels sadness and disappointment when we turn away from our God. Wonderful perspective, Paula. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2024 8:15:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Yes, He must be sad with the way the world is going.... Have a great day writing away.....................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2024 11:00:00 AM

He indeed sheds tears…oh how he loves us!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2024 12:43:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Yes, He does love us.... Have a great day writing away.....................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/18/2024 3:47:00 PM

I believe there are so many drops from Him these days, if I could reach Him I'd dry each one for Him, beautiful poem Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2024 8:56:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Raindrops" write to be beautiful. Yes, I'd dry each one for Him. Have a great day writing away......................

Brenda J. Joyce

Date: 6/18/2024 8:59:00 AM

Wow! Thanks for posting!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2024 11:43:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Have a great day writing away.....................

Joseph May

Date: 6/18/2024 5:51:00 AM

The state world today makes God shed tears, Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2024 11:42:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Yes, the world today makes God cry in much sadness. Have a great day writing away......................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/18/2024 1:28:00 AM

Considering the evil that reigns in this world, I found this monoku brilliant.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2024 11:41:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Raindrops" write to be a brilliant monoku. That makes me very happy. Thanks... Yes, there is evil everywhere. Have a great day writing away......................

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/17/2024 3:07:00 PM

Hi Paula. I can see why God would be crying. Good poem. I hope you are well. Blessings :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2024 11:37:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. I am well/blessed. Hope you are also well/blessed. Hugs.... Have a great day writing away......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2024 1:46:00 PM

We are dry right now, so God is resting from grief over us, but in other places it has poured down on them. thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2024 11:35:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. It is good to have rain then it is good to dry out. We need rain.... Have a great day writing away......................

Suzette Richards

Date: 6/17/2024 1:42:00 PM

Sad, but a good point, especially with all that is going on in the world today, Paula. Bless, Suzette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2024 11:33:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops" write. Yes, this one is a little sad. Have a great day writing away......................

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