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Raindrops - Not Quite Haiku

Raindrops, noisy little buggers ....ricochet off the windows Raindrops, itinerant drummers .....searching for a beat Raindrops gather, meander mob-like ......through the streets Puddles of predictability raindrops repeat .......tapping points Artistic raindrops .....diamond studded .....spider webs Freezing raindrops glaze ...........frosting snow Raining cats and dogs ........cold nose wet fur John G. Lawless 2/16/2021

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Date: 2/18/2021 9:09:00 PM
These are really superb, John. Each one a gem. Brilliant! :) gw
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Date: 2/17/2021 1:04:00 PM
Not quite Ku but absolutely awesome to read! All those kinds of rain, very interestingly portrayed.
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Date: 2/17/2021 4:32:00 AM
Love this..love the rain. God bless you with many more... love and prayers, Gina
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John Lawless
Date: 2/17/2021 11:20:00 AM
I know I haven't fully matured as I still think that puddles are for jumping in....

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