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'rainbows Unthinkable'

her 
rainbow 
colorless  
her cash dried up
the kids were starving
felt like ending it all
a stranger’s knock altered all
a channel to fulfill His will
God send them rainbows unthinkable 
and He turned her mourning into dancing




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Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 8/27/2011 4:34:00 AM

really amazing thought to write~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~smile for the win~~~*-*junjun

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/26/2011 5:58:00 PM

Congrats to you my dear friend on your 1st place win... so proud my luv!!! LOve Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2011 10:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Brian's fine contest..Sara

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/26/2011 1:59:00 AM

wow! colorless rainbows... brilliant! congrats!

Tim B

Date: 8/25/2011 10:06:00 PM

And he bestows blessings on those who would ask and deserve. Congratulations on your first place win! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 8/25/2011 5:08:00 PM

Many congrats to you, Wilma : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/25/2011 3:17:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your first place win with this wonderful write so outstanding my friend.. wow..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2011 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/25/2011 12:28:00 PM

wilms, how divine!... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning top win! :) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2011 9:24:00 AM

I am glad that stranger came with the joy of the rainbow..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Your presence was uplifting..Sara

James Fraser

Date: 6/12/2011 8:23:00 AM

Many a rainbow is going to have to appear Wilma to assist so many families who are destitute. Let's hope they do appear :)

Wilma Neels
Date: 6/12/2011 8:33:00 AM

James, I know hey but we always have hope, don't we? ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2011 11:30:00 PM

A wonderful story. It makes me want to know more, and what inspired this, Wilma?

Kash Poet

Date: 6/10/2011 7:17:00 PM

Lovely poem with a very positive ending.Liked it Wilma.

James Foulk

Date: 6/10/2011 6:33:00 PM

a great piece of creative work.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/10/2011 11:01:00 AM

I do have a spyglass pointed in your direction, but seems you keep the curtains closed at the best times lol....I wil say hello to Jeter and A Rod for you.... love across our imaginary bridge with no tolls just hugs....love Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/10/2011 10:36:00 AM

How I love the happy ending in your poem, Wilma. I'd like to think there are rainbows in our future, even when skies seem gloomy at the present. Beautiful poem, dear. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/10/2011 10:08:00 AM

Beautiful touching Poetry as only your can pen... love the words and I love the form... Im glad your feeling bette my luv... Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/10/2011 8:57:00 AM

and this is my new favorite Wilma.. luv the build up of sorrow to happy ending for with God all things turn around and ascend to His Glory .. this is truly a work of art my friend..luv.. now I am dancing too..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/10/2011 6:27:00 AM

What a touchy and poignant character sketch and wish her mourning turned into dancing, Wilma, enjoyed the poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2011 6:19:00 AM

Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Wilma. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 6/10/2011 5:42:00 AM

Smile ~ “Yesss, Tis How It Does Sooo Go `My Dear, Blessed & Beautiful Wilma Neels!!!` ~ Whether It Be In Body Here & Now Or, Spirit, `Then & Forever` ~ Very Inspirational & Very Beautiful My Dear ~ `Love, Always,`” John!:) ~