Rainbows

I followed a rainbow and reached the end. No pot of gold but I found a friend.

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Karen Jones

Date: 6/19/2022 8:48:00 AM

Perhaps the gold would run out. But true friends last a lifetime through trials and despite rich or poor finances! Enjoy how you make me think and reflect.

John Grinsell
Date: 6/19/2022 10:10:00 AM

I agree. Friends and family are so important. John

Emilia James

Date: 6/16/2022 2:49:00 PM

I would rather find a friend than gold. Lovely picture of your dog. Emilia : )

John Grinsell
Date: 6/16/2022 2:58:00 PM

I have a second bit to the "Rainbow" poem but can never get it so I'm happy with it. Anyway this is it. No fortune to lead a life of leisure. But lucky I've managed to find my treasure. Something not quite right with it but can't put my finger on it.

John Grinsell
Date: 6/16/2022 2:54:00 PM

Thanks Emilia. That's my beagle, Max. He is very affectionate. Extremely intelligent. And funny.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 6/15/2022 12:01:00 AM

Short and sweet. Well done.

John Grinsell
Date: 6/15/2022 12:26:00 AM

Thank you Janette.