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Rainbow shimmering in sun

Peacock Bright feathers Graceful and proud Rainbow shimmering in sun Beautiful Beautiful Male peafowl Magnificent courting display Elegance in every motion Majestic Majestic Iridescent plumage Tall and slender National bird of India Revered Revered Timeless treasure Feathers like blueberries Loved across the world Adorable An elfchen chain Written 19th January, 2025.

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 1/27/2025 5:28:00 AM

beautiful flow of thoughts dear poet. This is the first time I am reading peacock called as 'Rainbow shimmering in Sun'! Amazing. Happy writing dear poet. Cheers!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 1/27/2025 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for finding my poem enjoyable. I really appreciate this your kind gesture.

Mark Toney

Date: 1/26/2025 8:04:00 AM

Maclawrence, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (8). Because you met the Bonus Challenge, your poem is featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Your ending prompt words for your Elfchen chain are "Beautiful, Majestic, Revered, and Adorable." This is a lovely ode to the "male peafowl" that is truly "Loved across the world." A Fav poem for me.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 1/26/2025 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for giving me this special honour and I appreciate each of the words you gracefully used to appreciate my poem. Many thanks.